FANTASIES

Sep 01, 2006 22:48

Title: Fantasies
Written By: sonofabiscuit77
Timeline: Future, about 3-4 years after 513
Rating: R
Warnings: Slightly angsty, maybe a bit sappy?
Author Notes: Many thanks and kudos to a great beta bluebirdgirl for her suggestions and corrections.

Fantasies )

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sian265 September 1 2006, 14:02:47 UTC
You know this begs for a sequel? Loved it!

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sonofabiscuit77 September 14 2006, 15:13:40 UTC
Funnily enough, I did begin writing a sequel to it, obviously an unusual moment of inspiration, but it's just stalling at the moment with the weight of RL crap, but hopefully I'll get back to it soon.

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_kiden September 1 2006, 15:27:55 UTC
Terrific.

“What’s your ultimate most fucked up fantasy?” he asks and I don't want to lie anymore.

“You. Seeing you everyday, waking up with you everyday.” It’s the truth but I’ve never dared say it before.

That just about broke me into itty-bitty pieces, though. (in a totally good way.) :)

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sonofabiscuit77 September 14 2006, 15:18:48 UTC
Thanks! Funny you should quote that line as I found it a tad cheesy but I couldn't bring myself to delete it......so it stayed!

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_kiden September 14 2006, 15:23:54 UTC
But I have such love for Brian and Justin cheesiness. Makes me happy in all types of different ways. :)

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sonofabiscuit77 September 14 2006, 15:30:02 UTC
Yeah, sometimes it is excusable and dare I say it.....understandable!

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suzvoy September 1 2006, 16:04:48 UTC
I was hoping beyond hope that Brian wouldn't get the Dare account, but end up going anyway. YAY!!

Fabulous. You made me tear-up :D

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sonofabiscuit77 September 14 2006, 15:21:28 UTC
Thanks so much for your kind words, I love reading your stuff so it's great that you liked my effort. I thought the ending was kinda obvious but who wants a gritty unromantic ending when they could have the lurve huh?

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kimberleyqaf September 1 2006, 16:08:31 UTC
You had me worried there for a minute, thinking 'oh no! can these two handle another separation?!?!' but I really loved this :)Great job!!

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sonofabiscuit77 September 14 2006, 15:32:45 UTC
Thanks :) Personally I don't particularly like reading fics where they're separated for a long time, so that was never going to be on the cards when I had the power to do what I wanted with them.....though, dangling the possibility in an angstalicious fashion always works.

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beathen September 1 2006, 17:10:14 UTC
Reading the "fantasies" was really funny; Justin has a good imagination! I'm so glad that Brian decided to go to London, too. He can't ever be separated from his Sunshine!! Wonderful job!

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sonofabiscuit77 September 14 2006, 15:22:40 UTC
Writing the "fantasies" was also much fun as you can imagine! Believe me there are many that didn't make the final cut............ Thanks for your kind comments.

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