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YEARN

Sep 01, 2006 22:49

Title: YEARN
Written By stephmck:
Timeline: 513 to April 2007
Rating: 17+
Warnings: Occasional coarse language. M/M sex. Spoilers - all seasons, especially ep 513
Summary: It’s Justin’s first solo show in New York. Brian is the first to see it on the eve of the opening.
Author Notes: For my two wonderful betas. Without them, this would not have been ( Read more... )

Comments 82

sexy_pumpkin September 2 2006, 01:31:28 UTC

So beautifully written, so many memories & so much love & understanding between them for the future. Loved it, wipes eyes,,sigh!!!

such_a_steph September 10 2006, 13:06:00 UTC

Hi Jackie! Because we have such different views on 513 I was rather surprised it spoke to you in this way, but I am so glad it did. I'm thrilled you loved it... that means a lot to me :)

Yearn fansee September 2 2006, 02:38:19 UTC

What an imaginative way to bring many elements together! Nicely written, too. FanSee

Re: Yearn such_a_steph September 10 2006, 13:07:58 UTC

Thank you on both accounts. As a first time author, I kind of needed validation of both content & composition, so your words very very encouraging :D

moon__river September 2 2006, 04:22:20 UTC

omg i loved this

i've only watched 513 once bc i cried so much the first time that i've avoided it ever since. the part about the last night painting almost made me cry again! especially loved this line
He gathered his things and walked towards the loft door. As Justin turned to close it, a sense of déjà vu caused him to pause and reflect. His life began when he had closed that very door five years earlier… from the other side.

Brian was awake, but motionless. It took everything he had just to keep breathing. He lay there, in the heat that radiated from where Justin had been. Feeling the warmth, he could pretend that his love … his life … had not just walked out through the heavy steel door.

such_a_steph September 10 2006, 13:11:43 UTC

It thrilled me that I got an OMG out of you!!! And that was probably my favourite part of the fic too. (Note: the Australian spelling comes out to play now LOL!)
Personally I love to cry... and put 513 on frequently to give me my fix *is weird that way* It's one of my favourite episodes.

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such_a_steph September 10 2006, 13:14:55 UTC

Thank you so very much. Your few well chosen words had a huge impact on me. I'm so very pleased it spoke to you in that way. This was my first adventure into writing & your feedback left me feeling validated as an author.

beauty_forashes September 2 2006, 10:45:19 UTC

Stunningly beautifully written!

such_a_steph September 10 2006, 13:16:17 UTC

Thank you so much. Now I feel that I have perhaps given something back after the wonderful crackfic you wrote for me :)

beauty_forashes September 10 2006, 20:23:15 UTC

You wrote "Yearn"! I'm thrilled! :) I haven't even gotten around to checking who wrote what, but I remember thinking I really have to flist whoever wrote this one - lol!
But IMHO comparing "Yearn" to that crack! fic is kinda like comparing Ma Maison to McDonalds - no comparison. Hope you write more, that really was excellent. :)