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THE WAY THE WORLD ENDS

Sep 01, 2006 22:33

Title: The Way the World Ends
Written By: faile02
Timeline: During and directly after season one
Rating: G
Summary: Daphne was always Brian's biggest advocate.
Author Notes: This is unbeta'd due to a time restraint. Forgive me. This is also my first QaF fic, so any sort of constructive crit would be awesome. 1035 words

( The Way the World Ends )

Comments 52

_kiden September 1 2006, 14:47:37 UTC

After Justin went inside, you sat in the car for a few minutes and waited. You waited until you saw Michael leave and you waited even longer until you saw Justin again, tucked carefully under Brian's arm.

That just pretty much killed me. This is beautiful - and one of the only Daphne POV fics that didn't make her sound like an annyoing 12 year old. I loved it. Big time.

Great job. :D

faile02 September 10 2006, 23:53:51 UTC

Thank you so much. I adore Daphne and I really wish she had had more screen time. As the best friend of a wonderful gay boy, I can totally understand everything she went though.

asm614 September 1 2006, 15:28:31 UTC

Beautiful... And I can totally relate to the very beginning, finding out that the one you've always pictured yourself with is no longer an option [in that sense].

I really enjoyed this :)

faile02 September 10 2006, 23:55:36 UTC

Thank you! I think a lot of people can.

paddies September 1 2006, 17:27:14 UTC

Awww...I really love this!! Your Daphne pov is moving and totally spot on, great work. :D

Please keep writing!

faile02 September 10 2006, 23:57:17 UTC

Hee, thank you! I can get into Daphne's head real easy, she's a pleasure to write. If I do write anymore actual stories (I'm more of a drabble person) it'll probably be in her POV.

shadownyc September 1 2006, 20:59:45 UTC

I love the way you approached this Daphne POV. The premise that Daphne was jealous from the beginning and then grew to see and trust Brian's love for Justin was lovely.

Great first fic! :D

faile02 September 10 2006, 23:59:07 UTC

I think any girl, after realizing that her best boy friend is gay would be jealous of the man that 'took' him away. But she's smarter than that, and wouldn't let it get in the way of their relationship.

Thanks!

beathen September 2 2006, 03:08:05 UTC

The ending was so sweet. It's great to see Daphne being so sure about Brian's love for Justin.

faile02 September 11 2006, 00:00:02 UTC

It's the best friend's job to be supportive. :-)

Thanks!