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IN MY ROOM

Sep 01, 2006 22:34

Title: In My Room
Written By: vlredreign
Timeline: Season 1, Episode 118
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Language
Summary: Sometimes, you gotta go for it. Justin's POV.

( In My Room )

Comments 31

118 firehead30 September 5 2006, 07:48:00 UTC

This is my favorite scene in all of QaF. I loved how you captured Justin's voice, motivation, conflict with his parents, desire to discover what makes him the best homosexual he can be. This is a lovely little ficlet.

This is the Brian that no one sees but me. The one that can bring me back to life with a look, a touch, a gentle caress of my face. The way he looks at me, as if I’m the only person in the room. The way he kisses me with a hunger that can never be sated. The way he fucks me, sometimes rough, sometimes gentle, and always good. The way he holds me close to him afterwards. That’s the Brian that I know. I think that I’m the only one who does, who ever has. I have to be the best that I can be. Because he expects no less. And to do otherwise would be to deny everything that I am. Everything that he showed me that I could be.

I loved this section. Teaching Brian teaching Justin to expect nothing but the best from himself. And then you have Justin's voice
I am Justin Taylor, and I am an artist. It’s what I am. It’s who I ( ... )

Re: 118 vlredreign September 11 2006, 03:43:10 UTC

This is one of my favorite Justin scenes as well. The first time I saw it, I smiled, too. I admire people who can draw and paint, it's like watching magic. And I just loved how he couldn't not draw that jacket. You knew right then that he was going to PIFA, no matter what. Thanks for the feedback!

seamonkeyz27 September 5 2006, 22:11:28 UTC

Wow... Justins voice was just amazing during that...wonderfully written

vlredreign September 11 2006, 03:44:00 UTC

Thanks. I want to do more from Justin's POV, a lot less complicated, lol.

IN MY ROOM fansee September 6 2006, 20:04:39 UTC

There's something admirable in a piece that is exactly the right length, not too long, not too short...like this work. What a pleasure to read! Thank you. FanSee

Re: IN MY ROOM vlredreign September 11 2006, 03:45:02 UTC

That's so funny, I thought that it was way too short! Thanks, glad you liked.

jillapet September 7 2006, 20:17:34 UTC

Very nice!

vlredreign September 11 2006, 03:46:04 UTC

Thank you! Oh, squee, the flag! I just watched that yesterday. Here, this icon goes with that.

_alicesprings September 8 2006, 12:47:06 UTC

Nice stuff! :)

vlredreign September 11 2006, 03:46:54 UTC

Thanks, Alice, and thanks for your support and hard work. It meant a lot! *hugs*