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SCRABBLE

Sep 01, 2006 22:38

Title: Scrabble
Written By: chering and fansee
Timeline: post-513
Rating: NC-17

( Scrabble )

Comments 111

asm614 September 1 2006, 16:28:12 UTC

Justin leaned up, bracketed Brian’s face with his hands, and kissed his glistening eyes shut, first the right and then the left. “I want you to do something very, very difficult for me,” he said, his voice almost a whisper. “I want you to forgive the one person who hasn’t forgiven you. Let it go, Brian, and I promise I’ll never mention it again.”

This part was awesome.

I really enjoyed this, it was a refreshing and unique take on "dare", and B/J bonding time is always welcome. :)

chering September 10 2006, 16:55:45 UTC

Thanks for being the first to reply to our fic! It's a real thrill for authors to get feedback and I'm glad you liked ours.

shadownyc September 2 2006, 01:42:03 UTC

This is absolutely AMAZING!!!

HOT sex, combined with LOVE and the initial humor peppered throughout through the use of the short words and pineapple-guava juice.

The use of "dare" in a multi-layered way from the obvious in the game to the dare to release the heavy weight of guilt was beautifully illustrated.

I'm usually terrible at guessing, but I think this is a Xie fic...maybe???

xie_xie_xie September 2 2006, 07:03:38 UTC

I'm flattered as hell you thought so, shadow, because I was just about to post that this is the best story here, ROFL!

But I didn't write it.

It's extremely good.

shadownyc September 2 2006, 10:24:46 UTC

I am so bad at guessing. I think I'll just continue reading and skip the guessing part. LOL

I think it's fabulous, as well.

chering September 10 2006, 16:57:12 UTC

You two cracked us up! Shadow, after all we've been through...
We loved the fact we had you fooled!

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epicallytired September 2 2006, 07:12:17 UTC

this was good. really, probably the best one i've read so far. i'm not gonna guess, i'm always wrong, but whomever you are... nice job.

chering September 10 2006, 16:57:47 UTC

Thank you so much. Coming from you that really means a lot.

epicallytired September 10 2006, 17:02:55 UTC

oh, don't get me wrong... it's so good i kinda really hate you a little... so while it's a compliment... my raging inner jeaulous bitch has to agree with Xie...it's troubling.

but honestly, damn fucking good. i love people who write brian and justin as smart, loving, and adult...

chering September 10 2006, 17:12:23 UTC

I can only return that compliment because your writing does the same and it has never let me down.

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xie_xie_xie September 2 2006, 07:16:54 UTC

I have no clue at all who wrote this, but it's definitely the best story. I loved it.

Scrabble fansee September 10 2006, 18:35:33 UTC

And your economiums mean so much because we are your mega-fangirls. Be prepared for sneak photoshoots as you eat your baked eggs. FanSee (note appropriateness of cyber-name)

Re: Scrabble xie_xie_xie September 10 2006, 18:51:52 UTC

HEY! I'm not speaking to either of you.

And they were STEAMED eggs.

I need some time to process this. My only consolation is it took two of you to write something I liked better than my own freaking story.

tazza_di_jo September 2 2006, 09:06:07 UTC

Wow, just...

Wow.

chering September 10 2006, 16:58:24 UTC

Glad we could put a little amazement into your day!