O S(o)good

Nov 15, 2008 19:13

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pre_breakofdawn November 16 2008, 20:53:57 UTC
I LOVE IT!

"champion of the chest"

Beautiful...

Good work man, It was a pleasure to read. Hope this helped you find some peace of mind

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darewreck November 16 2008, 23:41:18 UTC
Thanks man.
If only for a little while, it did.

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gin_fisch November 21 2008, 16:38:21 UTC
i love the reference to leaves, and your repetition.
and the last verse i love especially!

you are a writer sir ;)

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