Author:
dargai Title: In the end, these choices cast long shadows
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Severus, Lily, James
A/N: Yeah, this is the first MWPP fic I've managed to *finish*! Yay, me.
Summary: Lily sees changes where she least expects it. And some avenues are sealed forever.
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Boys are clumsy, with hard, shrill needs, and she doesn't have the desire to give in to them... )
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I'm at ff.net under a different name, here. Just a caveat that I haven't written a lot of HP fics.
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No, really, I'll invest some time and effort since you produced a wonderful story! This is a triumph in deconstructing and reconstructing the connection between Lily and Severus, the breaking of it, the transition toward Potter, and making it all so fitting and believable. And, god, the poignancy of Sev's conversation with Lily (see, suddenly he's Sev, not Snape. Definitively so.)
There's a lot I love here, but I think my favourite bit is "She doesn't understand his greed." Also, Lily's bit here: "You don't know anything about love," she says, soft and low. "You can't love me and hate everything I am. I won't watch you destroy my world and do nothing. You need to be better than that."
As it ends, that day he hates his father more than he loves her, and so they choose their paths.
I don't have enough reallys for how good this story is. It's beautiful and it's done what Rowling didn't - make Lily and Sev's connection not only possible but beautiful.
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I'm really happy that Lily and Sev's relationship came through so well (he really is Sev in my head now).
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