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dark_elf_lady

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Mar 13, 2006 15:56

Oh, I love vacation. Anyways, I wrote this story for the Hump_day101 challenge.
( Here it is: Watching You )

Comments 5

cinnamon_sins March 14 2006, 07:08:41 UTC

Oh...*tear* That was so emotional. Terrific job! Great use of prompt.

And thanks for entering our challenge.

By the way, you might want to think about a light R rating due to language. Other than that, everything was terrific.

dark_elf_lady March 14 2006, 18:58:05 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I'm glad you thought it was emotional, I was worried it didn't have enough emotion. I'll change the rating. I always have trouble deciding what rating to make my stories. Thank you for making the challenge, it gave me a reason to write something and actually finish/post it.

cinnamon_sins March 15 2006, 06:21:22 UTC

If you are ever not sure of a rating, it's always safer to go up, than to go down.

As for the challenge, I'm glad you posted. So far you were the only entry (besides mods). We're hoping to get more people next week. My goal for the first challenge was one entry, so thanks for making my day. We hope you'll join us again next challenge (posted tonight).

enchanted_jae March 14 2006, 08:29:31 UTC

This was so raw and painful and Harry was hurting so much. It's well written, I just wish it didn't end that way. *sighs*

dark_elf_lady March 14 2006, 19:12:36 UTC

Thanks for the review. Those were the feelings I was trying to get across, so thanks for noticing that. Yeah, I have a problem with writing too much angst. It's weird. because I don't read a whole lot of angst. Writing this ending killed me. I guess my writing side is also my angsty side. Sorry, I just got a bit rambley there.