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Jul 08, 2006 21:22

New fic. *does a dance* Real update soon.

( Follow the yellow brick... something that isn't a road, because I'm so sick of the Wizard of Oz... )

h_d101, fic

Comments 5

my_crimson_rose July 4 2006, 13:22:55 UTC

That was very very sweet. Bitter-sweet. Poor Harry... I really like the idea that Lily wrote a letter for him. I've sort of used the same thing in one of mine original fics, and it works very well. Letters like this makes sentimental fics, and it's very nice. :D
Oh, Harry... *hugs teh Harry*

dark_elf_lady July 4 2006, 22:04:41 UTC

Thank you. I wish he would find a letter Lily wrote to him. That boy needs something like this. :).

my_crimson_rose July 4 2006, 22:06:43 UTC

Ye welcome.

Well, let's hope for that in book 7, then. :D

crypticdreams July 6 2006, 14:32:04 UTC

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And I don't even like Harry! Or James. But I like Lily. ... *ducks tomatoes*

No, really, this was beautifully written. It flowed well, as if Lily was trying to put everything she could into it, but at the same time, she was having a hard time controlling her emotions. I think you captured Lily's (and likely James's, too) feelings extremely well. You almost brought a tear to my eye! I know that sounds like nothing, since I cry so easily, but I NEVER cry over Harry, EVER. So it's actually saying a lot. :D

...You're making me want to ship Sirius/Remus. Just 'cause of that one sentence. GACK, you're brainwashing me!!! *runs away*

dark_elf_lady July 6 2006, 21:02:00 UTC

Aw, thank you so much. I don't like Harry either. I don't know why I've been writing so much with him in it recently. Thank you again. And, yes! *pulls out brainwashing stick* Sirius/Remus = gooood. :)