Yahh! We started out with some truth! Joel and Benji love sluts, Paul and Chris are supposidly gay if it weren't for the drink! Ok. Erm. Yeah. Not really.. >< Wait. They are. Gay. o.O Benji is not a..er..whatever you call them. hahaa. He was.. Benji is straight-edgeish..and dying from a STD...works..
Oh my! What a finish! I know you said your writing more though. But.. dude! hahaa. Its good. You don't any typos I noticed either. Basically, its really good! I love the story line to far. You should write more! Benji been diagnosed with that and all.. Has Billy catched it? Oh the suspencful(word?) horror! hahaa.
Long time since I read a fic that was fucking well written. Hahaa. Good fight scene too. Your a liar! You said you couldn't write.. ><
(uh.. that commment/review is so badly constructed ><)
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That was amazing!
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Wait. They are. Gay. o.O
Benji is not a..er..whatever you call them. hahaa.
He was..
Benji is straight-edgeish..and dying from a STD...works..
Oh my! What a finish! I know you said your writing more though. But.. dude! hahaa. Its good. You don't any typos I noticed either. Basically, its really good! I love the story line to far. You should write more! Benji been diagnosed with that and all.. Has Billy catched it? Oh the suspencful(word?) horror! hahaa.
Long time since I read a fic that was fucking well written. Hahaa. Good fight scene too. Your a liar! You said you couldn't write.. ><
(uh.. that commment/review is so badly constructed ><)
Susan hamster girl xxx (<-for old times ;) )
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