Triptych (PT, Mytho/Rue)

[dark_therapy]

Title: Triptych
Fandom: Princess Tutu
Pairing: Mytho/Rue (and some mild Mytho/Tutu)
Summary: Mytho reflects on his feelings for Princess Tutu, Kraehe, and Rue.
Rating: K
Warning[s]: None.
Disclaimer: I don't own Princess Tutu or the characters. Ikuko Itoh does. ^_^
Notes: Set after the series' conclusion. As always, all feedback is appreciated. Thank you

Comments

[demihime]

What a wonderful look into how Mytho might view these three girls!

[dark_therapy]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[insaneladybug]

Beautiful. I love how you introspect for these characters and paint such vivid pictures of their thoughts! You're just as amazing writing for Mytho as you are for Rue. The opening paragraph is a perfect introduction for the musings that follow

[dark_therapy]

Wow, you give such amazing and detailed feedback. Thank you! *_*

You touched on so many details that I hardly know where to begin. Firstly, it's lovely to know that you think I write Mytho well - he's so fascinating, but for obvious reasons, he's a hold harder to grasp in terms of character and feelings than Rue is, so it's a huge pleasure and relief to feel that I did well. It's also brilliant to know that you liked the intro section too! You have no idea how long I anguished wherever or not to keep it in, whether the story was better with it or without it, or if it wouldn't be better framed with just the three sections for each of the three girls. XD It's fantastic to think that you like it, and thought it fit well

[insaneladybug]

I'm glad it's helpful! ^__^ Sorry I wasn't able to say as much on the other piece. I like to give detailed reviews whenever possible.

Yeah, I can see how it could be a puzzle knowing whether the introduction should stay. But I'm glad you kept it! I think it would seem incomplete and a bit strange without it.

Angst and fluff are both awesome genres for writers to explore! And mixing them makes for very interesting and squeeable fics.

[dark_therapy]

Nonono, don't worry about the other piece! XD I like to be as detailed and indepth as I can too whenever I review anything, which is probably why it usually takes me so long to get round to it. ;)

I'm very glad that I stuck with the intro part too. I think the rest could have been trimmed and rewritten to fit just the three descriptions, but I'm still happier that I kept the first part. I'm happy you think so too!

The great thing about this pairing is that it has so many different stages; so I can have angst, fluff, creepiness, poignance, darkness, heartbreak and a happy ending all in equal doses. I definitely hope to touch on all and mix-up those basics someday. ^_^

Anyway, thank you again for your kind and helpful review!