I just stumbled on this story because I recently joined the community or am watching it or whatever...
I loved this very much and I'll tell you why... it was so credible and I think you got the characters just right.
You didn't make Inner-Max sound like a raging bitch either like some fics so kudos.
Alec hadn’t said that, but Max still heard it. She heard the dismissal in it, too. It stung a little, but she didn’t take it personally -- not really. Manticore had taught them that you couldn’t show weakness. Ever.
Thank you so much!!! :) I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to answer your review. I had some serious computer problems and wound up having to wipe the operating system. Most of my time lately has been taken up by trying to reinstall everything.
I'm so glad that you enjoyed "Damaged Goods", and that you thought I got the characters right! :) It was a fun challenge to write them at that point...when they're starting to really be friends, instead of just not-so-friendly enemies, lol.
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I loved this very much and I'll tell you why... it was so credible and I think you got the characters just right.
You didn't make Inner-Max sound like a raging bitch either like some fics so kudos.
Alec hadn’t said that, but Max still heard it. She heard the dismissal in it, too. It stung a little, but she didn’t take it personally -- not really. Manticore had taught them that you couldn’t show weakness. Ever.
-- this bit was super awesome and insightful.
xx Dulce
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I'm so glad that you enjoyed "Damaged Goods", and that you thought I got the characters right! :) It was a fun challenge to write them at that point...when they're starting to really be friends, instead of just not-so-friendly enemies, lol.
Thank you again!
Take care and God bless!
-Laughter
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