fic: who i was, from the start

Mar 18, 2010 09:54

Donghae was shooting baskets when he saw Yuri in the distance. His gym class was playing basketball that day but because of the odd number of people (and Donghae’s inability to play the sport) he wasn’t chosen to be on either team.

“Why did you register for team sports when you can’t play any sports?” Yuri asked, catching the ball as it bounced off ( Read more... )

yuri, yoona, snsd, fiction

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i'm still awake! anonymous March 18 2010, 14:39:05 UTC
i shall wait for the next chapter since it'll all be explained or ended or will start there (hopefully). why are you teasing us? why o why?!

xo,
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Re: i'm still awake! darkaslay March 22 2010, 18:53:28 UTC
why are you teasing us?

Haha, if I were finished I'd probably post a chapter every other day like I did with TUF, but for now, I gotta tease you guys. It's not on purpose, I promise :p

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regreted March 18 2010, 17:58:40 UTC
uh wow, what a great way to start of my spring break.
its starting to feel right now, you took only one chapter for yoona to be straight with yuri.

Who was she kidding? She had no chance against prince charming. Compared to him, she was a lowly peasant.
um, i hate that she was so insecure, yuri is always the prince.
thankfully she reclaims herself-- Then leave him, and love me.

terrific update.

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darkaslay March 22 2010, 18:57:07 UTC
...yuri is always the prince.

A lot of people want Yoona to be the prince >D For this fic, I think Yuri will be the more princely one.

Hope you're having a good break :D

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wazzzabii March 18 2010, 18:13:51 UTC
i feel relieved for yuri. she finally confronted yoona but now i'm anxious as to see what yoona's decision is even though i can pretty much tell what it'll be.

the scene towards the end how you described the sun shining and revealing yoona's tearing eyes to yuri really got to me! ;_;

you write so beautifully~ i'll never stop freaking out about it! :D lol

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darkaslay March 22 2010, 18:59:12 UTC
It isn't as black and white as people might think, yet. For the next chapter or two, YoonYul are going to be living in the gray. You'll see what I mean by the end of chapter 15 :]

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driftaway143 March 18 2010, 22:42:57 UTC
[“Everything but basketball.”]
I liked the way you started it, this line made me laugh
I don't know why but I like jokes like that xD

[“Then leave him, and love me.”]
AND I liked the way you ended it even though I want to know
what Yoona's gonna say (Hopefully it is what I'm thinking!)

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darkaslay March 22 2010, 19:06:10 UTC
Donghae is good comic relief when things get angsty in the story. Glad you liked that line :D

AND I liked the way you ended it even though I want to know
what Yoona's gonna say (Hopefully it is what I'm thinking!)

I don't think it is :p You'll see what I mean soon ;]

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heartoffire03 March 19 2010, 04:06:38 UTC
I usually check your page for updates during lunch time but since I needed something to cool me off after a Chemistry test today, I couldn't help but check it two classes earlier [english, of all classes! hah]. When I saw the update, I ditched watching Schindler's List and focused on reading instead. Oh, I think it was definitely worth it.

So anyway! Here goes my comment!

“Uh, yes! I didn’t even know you liked her like that.”

He forgot about the ball and stood close to her, like he was scared someone would overhear them. There were a few suspicious marks on Yuri’s neck but Donghae had assumed it was Tiffany, not Yoona.

“I’ve always liked her like that, Donghae.”

Oh goodness. I love Yuri's answer. Her brutal honesty and straightforward nature shifts something within me but I can't quite put a name to it. It's like, oh I don't know, moving? I think this was the part when I went, 'Oh Yuri...' I mean, c'mon, she had always liked her but never really went through with it. It's... agh. Not to mention that I see a miniscule YulTi in ( ... )

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darkaslay March 22 2010, 19:18:35 UTC
LOL, you picked my update for Schindler's List? Well, that movie is uber depressing so I guess I can see why.

I think this was the part when I went, 'Oh Yuri...'

That's the kind of reaction I was going for with her confession. It kinda makes you want to hug her because she's been liking Yoona for such a long time and only now something's being done about it.

...strings are definitely attached between the two of them.

I think Yoona wanted everything to be simple because simplest is easiest but they have such a past and, for now, nothing between them can be simple.

Not to mention, a big ouch to that last line there.

DDD: No one wants to here the word 'friend' from their crush, right?

But heh, Yuri is an exception to everything yes? LOL.

YES. xD

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heartoffire03 March 22 2010, 23:09:34 UTC
Yes! I've watched it before so I knew what was going to happen at that partiular scene >_< Besides, it was your update day that day so I thought checking earlier wouldn't hurt, hah :')

So, wait, has Yuri liked Yoona ever since their younger days? Like, you know, with all the flashbacks or did the line between friendship and romance blurred for Yuri somewhere in the middle?

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darkaslay March 23 2010, 15:12:37 UTC
Yep, Yuri has been liking Yoona way before high school, like that rain scene, but things didn't work out for them : /

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