fic: who i was, from the start

Apr 21, 2010 22:29

"I don't understand how you deal with him at Era. An hour ago, I wanted to break a beer bottle over his head after he kept calling me an angel."

Yuri covered her mouth to keep the water from spewing.

"Wait until he starts wiggling his eyebrows after everything he says, like it means something sexy," Yuri said with a grim smile.

Jessica's mouth ( Read more... )

yuri, yoona, snsd, fiction

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Re: I'm back~ darkaslay April 25 2010, 00:28:21 UTC
*imagines creepy-Taec face* DNW!


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indomethacin April 22 2010, 14:05:16 UTC
@($)*!@#(*!)(#*!(#)!*#!* THIS CHAPTER. I'm probably going to quote like half your fic to you but OMG:

"No, I'm not dating anyone but the thought of dating you makes me want to slit my wrists"

Jessica is just so.... precious here. I know I'm supposed to find her cold and bitchy but really, it's just incredibly cute.

but she had been deprived since they "broke up"

This made me a bit sad because well, it must mean that Yuri was special in a way to Tiffany.

"I don't doubt that but shamelessly flirting with everyone isn't the same thing as dating."

Well she can shamelessly flirt with me anytime.

Tiffany's hands wandered up Yuri's back and fingers pressed into her shoulder blades. It wasn't good that Tiffany could still do this, that she could still paralyze Yuri with one touch. "You get tense right here and I only know of one way to get rid of it."

Oh my god. The UST and the deep familiarity, it just. It makes me cry for my OTP T___T

The hands dropped and Tiffany took a step away from Yuri, suddenly ashamed by the obvious ( ... )

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darkaslay April 25 2010, 00:43:21 UTC
The UST and the deep familiarity, it just. It makes me cry for my OTP T___T

My heart, breaking into a million tiny pieces.

I keep forgetting your OTP is YulTi. I'm sorry for the torture! >D

How, how is it you can make me love the idea of JeTi so much??!!

'CAUSE THEY ARE PRECIOUS. JUST GIVE IN.

You know, I think the only reason why I love this chapter so much is because it's so Tiffany-centric. *___*

She's gonna be around A LOT :]

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indomethacin April 25 2010, 01:39:59 UTC
I keep forgetting your OTP is YulTi. I'm sorry for the torture! >D

*-----* really I wish I could convert you somehow, YulTi is in desperate need of good writers. but judging by your >D you're obviously not sorry and also unwilling to budge :p

'CAUSE THEY ARE PRECIOUS. JUST GIVE IN.

I MAY CONCEDE FOR THIS FIC, BUT ONLY FOR THIS FIC!!

She's gonna be around A LOT :]

at this point I've already forgotten that this is supposed to be a YoonYul-centric fic XD

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darkaslay April 25 2010, 20:29:53 UTC
*-----* really I wish I could convert you somehow, YulTi is in desperate need of good writers. but judging by your >D you're obviously not sorry and also unwilling to budge :p

But I really do love YulTi! At the moment, they're like my go to pairing whenever I'm inspired to write.

It's so easy to betray your OTP in this fandom, lol.

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robin_20 April 22 2010, 14:07:19 UTC
I've been alone with you inside my mind
And in my dreams I've kissed your lips a thousand times
I sometimes see you pass outside my door
Hello, is it me you're looking for?

I can see it in your eyes
I can see it in your smile
You're all I've ever wanted, (and) my arms are open wide
'Cause you know just what to say
And you know just what to do
And I want to tell you so much, I love you ...

I long to see the sunlight in your hair
And tell you time and time again how much I care
Sometimes I feel my heart will overflow
Hello, I've just got to let you know

'Cause I wonder where you are
And I wonder what you do
Are you somewhere feeling lonely, or is someone loving you?
Tell me how to win your heart
For I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying, I love you ...

Hello, is it me you're looking for?
'Cause I wonder where you are
And I wonder what you do
Are you somewhere feeling lonely or is someone loving you?
Tell me how to win your heart
For I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying ... I love you

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darkaslay April 25 2010, 00:57:41 UTC
LOL.

Is this for me, or for the chapter? xD

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robin_20 April 29 2010, 14:58:00 UTC
both 8'D

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darkaslay May 5 2010, 16:16:17 UTC
Thanks for both then :3

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anonymous April 22 2010, 14:21:26 UTC
ZOMG this chapter is TOTALLY DAEBAK!!! my most fav by far<33333
bbl to comment, gotta run >< damn physic

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anonymous April 23 2010, 07:50:58 UTC
ROFL Jess's bluntness kills me every time. How could she make rude comments so attractive.

she made beauty effortless and Yuri could think of one other person who did the same.
If there is no JeTi at the end. These two should totally become BFF(with benefits or not).
If they team together, they could so take down this whole world. Gosh combination of hotness and bitchiness.
Can't wait till they start the mind game.
Cruella and Babie << OMG you have no idea how hard i laughed rofl

How the hell do you see these things?! And don't tell me it's some deep psychological crap.
indeed amazing and kinda freaky lol when someone knows legit evrything about you.

"I will, just--just, let me shower first. I'm dirty from washing the bike and--"
Kwon Yul, You are the cutest thing EVER<3333

"Wanna kiss?"
Dang you got me good lol, I thought I was reading a diff fic or something, but YoonFany is just... O.o

"I need to see your ID."Uh ohhh someone is intrigued ( ... )

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robin_20 April 23 2010, 20:00:06 UTC
dude that looks so cool 8D

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darkaslay April 25 2010, 01:22:54 UTC
Can't wait till they start the mind game.

You know Tiffany well :]

Dang you got me good lol, I thought I was reading a diff fic or something, but YoonFany is just... O.o

Haha, I was worried everyone would figure that out. I'm glad I was able to surprise you.

http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/7469/wiwfts.jpg

OH SHIT. That is amazing! It's gorgeous. Can I use this as the cover for the soundtrack? *_*

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dinny_ April 22 2010, 15:05:42 UTC
HOSHIT! Jessica and Tiffany's little altercation was ridiculously sexy and amusing. I got a good morning lulz out of it, thank you. :D With the way you have them in this story they'll probably make everything around them burst into flames including themselves because they're so fucking HOT. (Especially with Tiffany being so deprived as of late...) DON'T WORRY TIFFANY DEAR, JESSI WILL MAKE ALL THE HURT GO AWAYYY 8D

I can't wait until Yuri "officially" introduces them, they'd make it so awkward for her lol. Finally someone who can match Tiffany's level of awesome. They should just fight it out, maybe wrassle a little. Teehee.

Lol Yul. My reaction to getting a $400 leather motorcycle jacket from my friends was similar to hers, except I wasn't wet and naked when I tried it on. :D

Aww Yoong, stop being so insecure about whatever it is, this is Yuri we're talking about! Haha, poor Yul's pride, all bruised up. =(

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dinny_ April 22 2010, 15:17:30 UTC
"What are you reading?"

"About some director."

UWF reference? :D

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dinny_ April 22 2010, 16:23:07 UTC
mte!!

"About some director ... and her actress girlfriend who happen to look like us."

Lol

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darkaslay April 25 2010, 02:29:58 UTC
They should just fight it out, maybe wrassle a little. Teehee.

With no clothes, right? >D

My reaction to getting a $400 leather motorcycle jacket from my friends was similar to hers, except I wasn't wet and naked when I tried it on. :D

LOL. Maybe that's a good thing considering how it went down for Yuri.

And yea, it was an TUF reference, lol. I've always wanted to do something like that.

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