fic: who i was, from the start
Yuri had two books opened at her dining room table, scratching away at filling paper.
"You looking for another poem for me?"
There was a bag of dried apricots in Yoona's hands, the plastic crinkling whenever she took one out.
"Not really, because I'm scared you're going to become completely conceited," Yuri replied, ducking her head to hide a ( Read more... )
"You looking for another poem for me?"
There was a bag of dried apricots in Yoona's hands, the plastic crinkling whenever she took one out.
"Not really, because I'm scared you're going to become completely conceited," Yuri replied, ducking her head to hide a ( Read more... )
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Ooooooooh you know what, I have absolutely no idea how to feel.
"Because you'll never want to see anything else."
You know, I want to hate you for always giving me so much hope T____T but I don't think I can.
A tingle of satisfaction sparked in Tiffany. She liked riling up Jessica; the girl hit back as hard as Tiffany hit and Tiffany found it almost as fun as shopping.
Hahahaha, Tiffany is so precious. But I suppose all that sarcasm only seems cute when you're on the receiving end. XD
I might actually be glad that you're going on summer break *____* I just had my second final paper this afternoon and I'm already exhausted beyond belief.
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LOL, this makes me think of people who go "OOOOOH... I don't get it" after a joke or something.
I hope you did well on that paper! :D
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Probably not. Oh well, life.
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yoong would be yul's first love while tiff was her first everything. it's kinda hard to know which one weighs more. i also feel sad that, yuri said it herself, tiff filled the gap that yoong left. it's both a good thing and a bad thing i guess. you'll never know if you were really loved or you were loved just because you were there at the right time. yul could have been vulnerable and since tiff was there she fell for her. oh pbbft. jess would make her feel better. i guess it's sweeter that way. starting off as the bickering couple and we'll see how you write jeti from there. :)
i can't help it but...is this you
"Never tell her that she looks good or hot or pretty--she knows she's sexy and doesn't need your opinion. Don't give her your life story and expect something in return. She gets bored easily and likes people who are difficult to read. She loves beer but she'll never drink it in public because beer isn't classy. She hates exercising but loves running. She ( ... )
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You know, I've thought a LOT about this and how true it is. I wondered what weighed more, which one was more important and I couldn't figure it out. It shows how different Yuri is from me, lol.
i can't help it but...is this you
WHAT? No, no, not really.
@PS. JeTi can barely stand speaking to each other and you want them to hold hands? :p
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hah. i have no idea either. people have been giving me different answers as well.
what, why not? since you're fixing someone's yoonyul heart why can't i have my jeti heart fixed? :(
xo,
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That's 'cause I knew I was gonna fix YoonYul hearts from the beginning XD
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I think I'm more in love with the Tiffany in your fic than the real life Soshi Tiffany. :O Oh noes. What have you done to me.
So long more till you update, you're killing meeeee dude. *dies*
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>D My Tiff is such a betch. Isn't the sweet, cute real life Tiffany so much better?
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NO I DID NOT JUST SAY THAT. :O
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DO NOT BE AFRAID TO PERV WITH US. WE'RE HARMLESS...FOR THE MOST PART.
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Oh dear god.. I should stop posting crap while falling asleep. Sorry it was around 12AM when I did this.
I meant we don't have values dissonance.
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Only by two days, haha.
You are running out of chapters!
I'm not! xD I'm currently finishing up 31. I think it'll end somewhere around 40 chapters.
But, I think we need more titillation there. Something along the lines of Tiffany noticing Jessica staring at her kissing the guy and opening her eyes and staring back.
That's not really who Tiffany is. Right now, she really doesn't care about Jessica. She doesn't care who she is and what she does and her only purpose in Tiffany's life at the moment is for pure amusement.
...Yoona recoil straight away from the jacket incident, perhaps you could have progressed it to the point where Yuri was touching Yoona back before making Yoona push Yuri away...It's too much of a Khun scenario. The way I saw it was Yoona couldn't treat Yuri the same way she did Khun. Yoona didn't want to build things up all the while knowing she wouldn't be able to get anywhere in the end. It's my fault, because as the writer, I should ( ... )
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Just kidding lol. Take your time, but don't pull a Robert Jordan, k?
About your comments on the jacket scene.. I never thought about it that way.. =O I was rather hoping Yoona would actually try to give it a shot before hitting that wall again. Looks like Yoona is surer of herself than I thought.
Well, if your ending isn't 5 chapters away, then I suppose you can take your time with the other subplots as well.
Perhaps you can post more than 1 chapter per week? =O This wait is killing me. =P
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