fic: who i was, from the start

May 12, 2010 11:55

Sooyoung held her key next to the lock, her muscles frozen in perfect stillness any street performer could admire. Her ears were trained on every sound beyond her dorm's door, listening for either music or speech.

When she was about to give up she heard the gentle rise of a voice, building up volume with each word. Sooyoung didn't know the song ( Read more... )

yuri, yoona, snsd, fiction

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darkaslay May 13 2010, 13:37:11 UTC
More fic art?! Bring it on babeh, but no pressure. You already made me an awesome banner :]

IT SHOULD SMELL LIKE CITRUS!

THAT IT SHOULD ;DDD

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anonymous May 12 2010, 17:20:10 UTC
i just woke up so i apologize if my comment doesn't seem to be coherent XD ( ... )

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darkaslay May 13 2010, 13:41:49 UTC
oh! the lip balm being orange flavored and jessica eating orange/tangerines was building up to that jeti moment in the alley wasn't it?

Yeaaa it was. But that's not the end of it. More tangerine-y moments are gonna pop up :]

@PS: What words would you want to get tattooed? Hmm, I'm not sure when I'll get another tattoo or of what. I do want another one but we'll see.

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anonymous May 12 2010, 17:27:44 UTC
you know if i didn't like the story i wouldn't care that i have to wait 5 days for the next chapter. but i'm downright pissed.

p.s. that was my way of saying the chapter was fantabulous and gdi why can't time go faster.

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darkaslay May 13 2010, 13:43:15 UTC
LOL, I really thought you were pissed and was all "I'M SO SORRY DDDDD:"

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anonymous May 12 2010, 19:53:26 UTC
You are a monster. Evil
lol of course, cruella for a reason.
Tiff surely loves to run, running away.

Tiffany identified the raving feeling Jessica produced as anger. It had to be.
Reads other like a book but failed to read her own.
I see blondie distracted her from thinking of Yul :D :D

Gosh YoonYul moments are too cute<3 and they actually stay fixed at pg13. YulTi moments always go beyond the rating in my head, see stuffs thats not even written

Fav. scene, that's hard. There are too many I can't choose, it's like choosing between YulTi and JeTi.

I just read the last few chapters, didn't get to comment. Those PS pics, you don't have to credit lol I don't have a name here but it's nary on ssf

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darkaslay May 13 2010, 13:51:32 UTC
Tiff surely loves to run, running away.

:} Tiff likes doing all types of running.

Reads other like a book but failed to read her own.

A lot of people suffer from this, no? They see everything going on around them except what's going on with themselves.

Whatchu talking about I don't need to credit? Of course I'm going to credit such greatness :D

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roisoleil1505 May 12 2010, 21:40:10 UTC
aww Fany meets her "rival" LOL...

yoonyul out-pranking each other but are so sweet at that, omgah... expected from your writing, i love it >.< *cookies flying to your laptop*

and I just have to comment on your Sooyoung, she is such a good friend~!!
random rant: it's very nice to see this kind of character put on sooyoung coz most of the time, writers tend to portray her as shikshin.... and that girl is so much more than just a food-vacuum, so yeah, I love it XD

my fav scene? too many, lol.. but i especially like KhunA's break up part, I Like how I can feel their emotion without the actual emotional words flooding while you're describing it, and at the same time the lack of emotion while they are breaking up /incoherent, just woke up but I cannot not comment on your fic 8D

how's your holiday so far??

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darkaslay May 13 2010, 13:55:17 UTC
*cookies flying to your laptop*

I imagined this, like cookies getting thrown at my lappy lol.

random rant: it's very nice to see this kind of character put on sooyoung coz most of the time, writers tend to portray her as shikshin.... and that girl is so much more than just a food-vacuum, so yeah, I love it XD

I kinda did this though, but my reason for it is the weed she smokes xD

Haha, I never expected someone's fave scene would be KhunA's breakup but I understand why.

My vacation is going very well, thank you :D I've just been hanging out at the beach and not doing anything productive.

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roisoleil1505 May 13 2010, 20:53:57 UTC
AAAAAAHHHHH~~ I've been hanging out on the beach doing nothing too, lol... the beauty of distance eds, lol lol lol..

I read through some comments, and yeah, sometimes it's hard to understand oneself than figuring out other people, lol.. maybe we don't see what we don't want to see in ourselves...

still, great chapter btw, again XD

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