fic: who i was, from the start

[darkaslay]

Yuri turned for the umpteenth time that night, trying to find a good position but each one made her uncomfortable. Her eyes opened to the darkened room to look at the ceiling. According to her alarm clock it was five in the morning and usually, she was dead asleep but there were too many things on her mind.

Grabbing her clothes, she got dressed

Comments

[indomethacin]

It must have been freezing yet Yuri smiled like the weather was nice for standing outside of the balcony of her girlfriend's house.

The cuteness, killing me slowly.

The impending storm-cloud of Yuri racing is making me twitch a bit, mostly because I keep thinking of that damn fried chicken commercial and the delivery scooter, and how its covered with skulls and tribal patterns.

Also, I... I like the JeTi. Oh my goodness what is happening to me?!

[darkaslay]

...I keep thinking of that damn fried chicken commercial and the delivery scooter, and how its covered with skulls and tribal patterns.

LOL WHUT, HOW DID I NOT NOTICE THIS?? Really, skulls? Oh my God that sounds precious 'cause, it's on a scooter. A SCOOTER.

DO BE CONTINUING LOVIN' THE JETI.

[indomethacin]

a scooter. A SCOOTER.

YES, EXACTLY. FRICKIN' SKULLS. It's the most hilarious thing ever, Yul is trying to be all badass but it's ruined by a) the giant bling and b) the scooter with the SKULLS.

DO BE CONTINUING LOVIN' THE JETI.

T____T -has no choice-

[darkaslay]

I did see that scooter and aw, really, how cute! :3 THE BLING REMINDS ME OF THE ITALIAN MOB. I DONNO.

[anonymous]

OMG! I completely forgot when you were gonna update, not to mention I still haven't had time to go back and give you a proper comment for the last one on SSF. I'm guessing you still haven't figured out how to work the new PM system? Lol.

Anyways... I should read this now... Might comment here, or hunt down the ssf thread for this fic to comment there.

~bbvc

[darkaslay]

New PM system is giving me a headache D:

I WILL GET IT FIGURED OUT SOON, PROMISE.

[owa1985]

OIIIii. You didn't read my guide, did you? If you can't understand it, at least tell me so.. >.<;;

Also, about this week's update:

Some respite from your recent roller coaster ride. Although, I can see you are starting up the Yuri is poor angle. And JeTi... <3 JeTi is going at a pace that is a LOT better than YoonYul, IMO. Then again, there is no NickKhun to get rid of here and no HyoYeon to lose, so we are down to just getting the bitchiness out of the way. Which is fine =D I really love the sparks in JeTi

[owa1985]

Oh yea, Darkaslay, I wrote a one shot. Do take a look and tell me what you think. >.<

http://soshified.com/forums/index.php?/topic/44375-soshi-pirates/

[darkaslay]

Got this bookmarked. I'll read it by tomorrow and drop a comment! :]

[owa1985]

I actually started another one.. It's a office drama starring KrysYulSic. The intro is a tribute to the Upwards Fall. =D

http://soshified.com/forums/index.php?/topic/44816-what-if-no-ones-watching

Let me know how this one goes too, k?

[anonymous]

first of all, i just found this story and i have to say that you're an amazing writer, just the way you cleverly describe details makes your writing that much more fun to read (not to mention a great storyline and real characters and story continuity, okay im rambling now but you get the point

[darkaslay]

As much as I would have loved to continue to write Tiffany as a sex goddess, I needed to give her more depth which you see when she breaks up with Yuri and her interactions with Jessica. I'm glad her vulnerability isn't turning you off from her because she is still human, with feelings, despite the fact she rarely shows it lol.

You gotta give JeTi some time. They're still feeling each other out ;]