Comments | darkaslay: fic: who i was, from the start

darkaslay

fic: who i was, from the start

Jan 12, 2011 12:48

Yuri adjusted the Velcro band on her gloves and eyed her surroundings. The racers around her were people she hadn’t seen before but that was probably due to the suddenness of the race. Taek’s text had been ingrained to memory already, the shortcut for this race a clear highlighted route in her head.

As exciting as it was, it was incredibly nerve- ( Read more... )

yuri, yoona, snsd, fiction

Comments 26

jetidal January 12 2011, 18:07:34 UTC

ffffffffffff omg i love you

jetidal January 12 2011, 20:35:09 UTC

dlkwejlkjwdlekjdwkejkj I DON'T HAVE WORDS TO SAY HOW MUCH I ADORE THIS UPDATE I CAN'T EVEN ( ... )

jetidal January 12 2011, 20:37:12 UTC

Again we're treated to Yoona's point of view and it really does click, the situation is just so real. ;A;
"She sucked in a corner of her bottom lip and silently debated, silently observed."
This is just so Yoona. You write them so well ;_;

"She insulted everything her eyes came across-- the peeling paint on the walls, the crooked dresser with a wobbly leg, the creaky floorboard and finally Jessica. Stupid blonde bartender Barbie."

"Jessica sat up to Tiffany's unresponsiveness, the covers slipping to show Jessica's bony shoulder. You don't eat enough, Tiffany wanted to tell her."lmfao at Tiffany insulting everything XD And drunk tiffany's stream of consciousness shows us more than she normally would have thought/said. I still want to shake her up and give her a small beat-up or something, for being such a bitter jerk about Jessica. Sergeant Sica should make an appaearance soon or Tiffany will be kind of insufferable... well, more than she is currently. Your references to the real soshi (with that line about Jessica being too skinny) ( ... )

darkaslay November 11 2011, 00:22:09 UTC

Thank you for all that you are.

Despite these being from so long ago, it's actually nice to go back and think how exciting all of this once was.

Again, thank you.

ext_208389 January 12 2011, 18:53:45 UTC

thank you thank you THANK YOU ( ... )

darkaslay November 11 2011, 00:27:45 UTC

You. Are. The. Bestest.

irishlittlewisk January 12 2011, 18:56:59 UTC

Long chapter. yes. yes. yes.

I love you.

The fact that Yoona didn't make a huge drama because of what Yuri did was very pleasant. I like it. Their cuteness is never boring, never.

JeTi is just... I can't even describe, just too amazing. And again I have "Undisclosed Desire" playing on my mind while reading their parts.

Thank you for the update and for giving a date for the next one.

Take care.

anonymous January 12 2011, 19:03:10 UTC

secondddd,

oh wows.
im really curious about Tiffany's past now.
AND PRAISE THE LORD, YURI IS ALIVE.
but it's probably going to get worse before it gets better right?
with the amount of money that she lost and all.
i wonder if yul's bike is okay?

screwthisover January 12 2011, 19:11:38 UTC

May I just hit you? This comment I should've written one chapter ago, but meh, there's already loads of comments there, so -shrugs ( ... )

screwthisover January 12 2011, 20:08:02 UTC

you me both, let's slap the bitch out of her... wait no i want the bitch to stay, but that's not the point. the point is Fany, bb i love you and all but BITCH, ENOUGH! it's hard to admit you're whipped, but you are so just drop it, jfc.

i'm going crazy along with Jessica O.o but who can resist the HBIC<3

darkaslay November 11 2011, 00:25:28 UTC

It's probably a little ironic I apologize for being gone when this comment is practically a year old...

Anyway, I am very sorry I disappeared XD