5/13 poem

[darkblues1974]

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Comments

[probablyrob]

hmmm
i like the flow of this

[darkblues1974]

yeah I've been trying to do more free verse poetry lately. 'vers libre' as its called in some other language.

I've been reading this book called archy and mehitabel, and its about a cockroach who was a poet vers libre in a past life, and he types poetry on this typewriter and some of it is actually pretty inspiring.

[sorajima]

i like this a lot...i can obviously relate and, as rob mentioned, the flow is really nice