Let Go

May 02, 2010 16:43

Title: Let Go
Rating: Hard-R for squick and kink? No sex in here, though.
Type: Yaoi
Pairings: Elricest
Warnings: Omorashi (desperation/wetting), humiliation.

A/N: Written for a prompt over at FMAkinky.

Let Go )

fma, fanfic

Leave a comment

Comments 15

nochick_fics May 3 2010, 01:06:20 UTC
I'm not gonna lie: I read this to see if it would squick me as much as I thought it might. It didn't. I don't think it'll ever be my thing, but you presented it very well. Excellent job. <3

Reply

darkblysse May 3 2010, 01:12:34 UTC
I'm not gonna lie: I blinked and went "A-buh?" when I saw that you'd commented on this. Because I thought it would squick you terribly. :P

But I'm glad it didn't. <3 Thank you.

Reply

nochick_fics May 3 2010, 01:14:57 UTC
My list of squick seems to be decreasing rapidly... >.>

Reply

darkblysse May 3 2010, 01:15:39 UTC
Eeeexcellent.

Reply


mindfueledmanic May 3 2010, 01:18:52 UTC
So wrong yet... SO GOOD. *faps shamelessly*

Reply

darkblysse May 3 2010, 01:19:26 UTC
Hee~ <3

Reply


topknot_forever May 3 2010, 01:35:24 UTC

Is it ok if I copy this to a word document and save it? *blush*

Reply

darkblysse May 3 2010, 01:38:17 UTC
Pfft, go ahead~

Reply


captain_hanzy May 3 2010, 01:58:30 UTC
For some reason I'm very pleased by this fic. I think I just discovered something very disturbing about myself, and I may have to go and cleanse myself from yet another sin.

God, I love your stuff XD Effing brilliant!

Reply

darkblysse May 5 2010, 03:44:39 UTC
Thanks for the comment~ ^//^

Reply


baroqueangel May 3 2010, 20:57:07 UTC
I love evil Ed and you write him so well <33

I was going to say I feel sorry for Al but that last sentence has me cheering him on and wondering if Ed will regret his actions :D

Reply

darkblysse May 5 2010, 03:45:37 UTC
Ed won't regret it... much. He might even be encouraged to torture Al like this again, after what Al puts him through. Masochist. XD

Reply


Leave a comment

Up