Finally!

Jan 08, 2006 16:03

Okay guys, I've finally thought of something to add on to my little "story" ^.^ Look for an edit on this entry. =3~

This is hard! I dont know how Pw amber or Shad chan fights, thus I have created a sucky fight scene! X.X

But here it is anyways. )

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raphaelaxd January 9 2006, 01:17:27 UTC
Wow, I don't think your fight scene was crappy at all ^^ It was probably a better fight scene than I could do, even if it didn't get finished and it was interesting to see what happened when Pw Amber finally used the key =) Are you gonna draw Charcoal in his angel form?

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darkchanscrazy January 9 2006, 21:31:40 UTC
Twas crappy, trust me. XP

Already did... ^^;; When I said baby blue eyes and white and gold wings, I was referring to Rapture, silly Rapha. :p~ *poke*

But I'm glad you liked it! ^.^

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raphaelaxd January 9 2006, 22:48:54 UTC
Oh yeah, Rapture ^^* Duh XD

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darkchanscrazy January 9 2006, 22:49:26 UTC
Silly goose! Rapture, yes! ;p~

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<3 <3 <3 =3 powerwing_amber January 9 2006, 02:07:24 UTC
So much.... emotion! Such wonderful writing that you do, Abbey! X3 And you say that you're so bad at it. Oh no! No! NO! You're a wonderful writer! In fact, this whole thing has me on the edge of my seat! =3~ I MUST read more when you write the next part! =D

*pokes* :p And it looked almost like a little love interest between Shad chan and Pw Amber. But, as they would both say with a flushed face, 'We are NOT in a relationship!' XP

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Re: <3 <3 <3 =3 darkchanscrazy January 9 2006, 21:36:30 UTC
Really? =D Thanks!! ^_^ I'll write the next part soon, i hope... ^^***

Thats what I was aiming for. XP This part was hard, mainly because Pw amber and Shad chan were the main characters, and I was trying to best to stay in-character. I wasnt sure if I got Shad chan right, and I'm nervous that i made Pw Amber a little over-mournful, since it, yes, was 5 years... XP But then I figured no, since they loved eachother and stuff. ^^;

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Re: <3 <3 <3 =3 powerwing_amber January 9 2006, 22:22:11 UTC
Yes really! "^-^" I can't wait! =3

*giggle* So you'd like to see Pw Amber and Shad chan together, is that it? :p

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Re: <3 <3 <3 =3 darkchanscrazy January 9 2006, 22:24:35 UTC
^^

It'd be cute, but... do we really need another Pw Amber X [Insert hedgie here]? :p

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envisioned January 10 2006, 00:01:48 UTC
im impressed. VERY VERY VERY IMPRESSED. the fight scene was good ^.^ and do my eyes fool me? if im not mistaken, i see a little romance between a pw Amber and a certain hedgie we all know....

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powerwing_amber January 10 2006, 00:05:09 UTC
N..n..no! O_O; Pw Amber and Shad chan are NOT in a relationship! XP I swear to you.

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envisioned January 10 2006, 00:09:49 UTC
ok! ok! i believe you! ()*=)

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powerwing_amber January 10 2006, 00:14:35 UTC
Riiiight. ^^; Sure, they have their moments, but as of now, it's Vex chan she's with. (Or Charcoal in the alternate dimension thread. ^^)

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riven_008 January 13 2006, 11:55:34 UTC
Hi, Abbey. Maybe I shouldn't be posting here but oh well. I know you didn't want to hurt me but you did. You said something about not being comfortable talking to me about Amber and vice versa. I know I kept talking about her. I know I shouldn't've. I tried to stop, really...but you talked about me with her. Why do you believe her? You know, you're believing lies about me. That's not cool. I talked about Amber, yes, but I tried to be as fair as possible, and nothing was a lie. I tried to see it all from her view. And I knew it wouldn't be fair to try to turn you against her, so I tried not to do that. But she turned you against me. I know that some of your words came right from Amber, because she said them to me. So maybe some of it was your ideas but I know it was also Amber's. Abbey, sometimes not saying anything hurts more than words. It's admirable to try never to hurt anyone, but it's also impossible. Your actions and (lack of) words hurt as much as words do. I know how it feels to be afraid of homosexuality because I was like ( ... )

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darkchanscrazy January 14 2006, 13:31:49 UTC
I'm sorry that I hurt you, but sometimes my silence is because I dont know what to say. Last night I was busy, and yes, I CAN get that busy at times, ESPECIALLY when it's with my guild leader. You say the difficult things make you stronger, but I disagree. I havent gotten stronger at all, but I have changed. I am not stronger, I only regret doing things before. Pw amber did not "Turn me against you". That wasnt her intention, but she WAS telling me what happened while I was gone, and why it all happened. But, try comparing her comments to yours. I actually feel like she read the entry. Also, she didnt choose to go to bed when she was sleepy. She stayed up until i felt better ( ... )

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riven_008 January 14 2006, 16:50:44 UTC
Are you sure that isn't her intention? How do you know? She's always talking about how she gets back at people when they hurt her. Peace will never be achieved and such. She says horrible things about me. Hey, I don't care. She can say whatever she wants. And she does. You're hearing her side of what happened. Even if she was trying to be as unbiased as possible, it's still a biased opinion. And if I told you my side, yes, it would be biased too. But in a different way, so you'd get more of a picture. But...I guess if you really think that I don't like you, that I don't care about you, that I just go to sleep whenever I feel like it, then there's nothing I can do to change that. I try to stay up. I don't do my homework when you're upset, because I think I should be here to talk to you. I fuss if my parents try to take me away from the computer when you need company ( ... )

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xkitty_earsx January 15 2006, 05:59:00 UTC
Hi. My name is Anastasia and I'm a friend of Molly's/Riven's from her school. She's made a few references to the situation and I just think you should know: this whole thing is tearing her apart. I obviously have a bias, since I don't know you or the other girl involved in this, but I think I know Molly well enough to guess that your understanding is very fractured right now ( ... )

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