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Endless Infatuation

Jul 04, 2005 22:11

Title: Endless Infatuation

Author: Noirissime(aka Darkchocolate_/Silentlytold)

Genre: Drama

Pairing: Harry/Draco

Summary: When you cannot be together irrational passion leads to irrational actions every time a moment can be stolen. DM/HP -Oneshot

Words: 2,029

Disclaimer: Neither one of these characters nor the surroundings they find themselves in ( Read more... )

Comments 31

feministfangirl July 5 2005, 05:59:41 UTC

Oh, I love this. It is so bittersweet and brilliant. It left me wanting more... not because it felt incomplete (it is perfect just the way it is), but because I just want things to work out for them in the end.

The sense of outside events pressing down upon them is very clear, and yet there is also the feeling that none of it matters when they are together. Which makes it even more painful when their time together draws to a close and they become aware of reality again.

Draco/Harry is my absolute favourite pairing also. I am planning to read your other stories when I have some more time because I really like your writing style. Do you mind if I friend you?

darkchocolate_ July 5 2005, 10:49:38 UTC

Thank you! It's how I imagine their love to be sometimes. Because their love is bittersweet. It's a bit of a tragedy really. both of them belong to a different side, yet they're obviously madly in love with each other... ;)
No, friend ahead!

k155_me July 5 2005, 11:59:54 UTC

thats fab, very bittersweet... but not overly so. theres the tinge of hope at the end, that they'll meet soon :D :D luv it cya xx

alexiris July 5 2005, 13:06:06 UTC

I liked it, especially their siuation and the ending, it suits them far more than the happily-ever-after

and I hope you don't mind the corrections:
it was simply too dangerous
Jusqu'à ce que nous nous rencontrions encore, mon amour.

silentlytold July 5 2005, 15:26:39 UTC

oh no! not at all! Thank you so much! I hate having grammar mistakes in my posts and my French isn't very good either. but I can't resist a French talking Draco ;)

alexiris July 5 2005, 22:00:51 UTC

Français ou Belge?

alexiris July 6 2005, 11:38:20 UTC

français

sully_is_hott July 5 2005, 13:45:12 UTC

This was amazing! I loved it! :) <33 Great job!

darkchocolate_ July 5 2005, 15:37:16 UTC

<3<3thankyou!

awww shadowclub July 5 2005, 14:45:13 UTC

Its so romantic yet bitersweet! You should definately write a sequel!

Re: awww darkchocolate_ July 5 2005, 15:36:07 UTC

The thought is rather tempting I must say. Who knows where they'll meet next time... one of them will definately be behind enemy lines. ;) The thought of them in a dark room deep within the Death Eater Headquarters makes me squeal.
Thank you for commenting. <3