Twenty Years Later (7/7)

Nov 19, 2010 15:03

Part Seven )

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capricornucopia December 7 2010, 03:57:10 UTC
I have so much love for this! I'm so happy that you posted it in one place and it's such an incredible story with all its twists and turns. You've built up such a believable world and complex relationships. Wonderful!

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darkdeeplakes December 9 2010, 22:49:34 UTC
Cheers, and thanks for letting me know. It's good to know you liked reading it.

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stagarden December 9 2010, 14:19:47 UTC
Apologies for not commenting in your journal sooner. I had hoped to reread this immediately after you reposted, but haven't yet had the chance. Nevertheless, I wanted to thank you more publicly for the beautiful job you did with this story.

I was so moved by the way you portrayed them as mature men, and loved the combination of realism in their relationship and the incorporation of magic. Your exploration of the trust issues between them was pure wish fulfillment for me.

Again, thank you for a wonderful story.

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darkdeeplakes December 9 2010, 22:52:13 UTC
Hello - what a nice surprise! And you are more than welcome; as you know, I'm so very pleased that you liked the story.

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frames_in_aria December 18 2010, 11:20:41 UTC
Oh God, I feel blessed that I read this on weekend with no imminent deadline. I have to admit that it's very difficult for me to not read this in one go.

Anyways, it was very lovelyyyyy. I really liked the balance of angst, fluff, and sap. I really liked how they repaired things slowly, at a right pace, and that they still got their own issue. I really liked the ache at the start and the contentment at the ending that I felt from the fic. I really liked how long the fic was.

Suffice to say, I am very, very satisfied. And I'm glad that you de-anoned since I can offer you so much loooove for the fic. Thank you so much, you made my day better ♥

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darkdeeplakes December 21 2010, 00:39:11 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad your day got better - and thanks for your lovely comment!

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neon_footprint December 22 2010, 17:33:24 UTC
This is beautiful, I love the subtle changes that come with the boys being a bit older, and I am a total sucker for pining, so really this hit all my buttons.

Lovely, lovely writing.

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darkdeeplakes January 3 2011, 00:44:20 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this story (and sorry for taking so long to reply - holidays and all that).

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kathyh December 27 2010, 10:56:48 UTC
Oh, how I loved this story. I was going to read it on the KMM and then thought I'd wait until it was finished and reformatted...and then didn't realise you'd posted it! It was absolutely wonderful from start to finish with all their insecurities making perfect sense. I loved the fact that they'd both got on with their lives, but being together made everything better at the end. I have a bit of kink for lovers who break up and then get back together again and you hit it perfectly here. Thanks so much for sharing :)

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darkdeeplakes January 3 2011, 00:45:19 UTC
Thank you for reading, and for your lovely comment!

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