I have so much love for this! I'm so happy that you posted it in one place and it's such an incredible story with all its twists and turns. You've built up such a believable world and complex relationships. Wonderful!
Apologies for not commenting in your journal sooner. I had hoped to reread this immediately after you reposted, but haven't yet had the chance. Nevertheless, I wanted to thank you more publicly for the beautiful job you did with this story.
I was so moved by the way you portrayed them as mature men, and loved the combination of realism in their relationship and the incorporation of magic. Your exploration of the trust issues between them was pure wish fulfillment for me.
Oh God, I feel blessed that I read this on weekend with no imminent deadline. I have to admit that it's very difficult for me to not read this in one go.
Anyways, it was very lovelyyyyy. I really liked the balance of angst, fluff, and sap. I really liked how they repaired things slowly, at a right pace, and that they still got their own issue. I really liked the ache at the start and the contentment at the ending that I felt from the fic. I really liked how long the fic was.
Suffice to say, I am very, very satisfied. And I'm glad that you de-anoned since I can offer you so much loooove for the fic. Thank you so much, you made my day better ♥
This is beautiful, I love the subtle changes that come with the boys being a bit older, and I am a total sucker for pining, so really this hit all my buttons.
Oh, how I loved this story. I was going to read it on the KMM and then thought I'd wait until it was finished and reformatted...and then didn't realise you'd posted it! It was absolutely wonderful from start to finish with all their insecurities making perfect sense. I loved the fact that they'd both got on with their lives, but being together made everything better at the end. I have a bit of kink for lovers who break up and then get back together again and you hit it perfectly here. Thanks so much for sharing :)
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I was so moved by the way you portrayed them as mature men, and loved the combination of realism in their relationship and the incorporation of magic. Your exploration of the trust issues between them was pure wish fulfillment for me.
Again, thank you for a wonderful story.
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Anyways, it was very lovelyyyyy. I really liked the balance of angst, fluff, and sap. I really liked how they repaired things slowly, at a right pace, and that they still got their own issue. I really liked the ache at the start and the contentment at the ending that I felt from the fic. I really liked how long the fic was.
Suffice to say, I am very, very satisfied. And I'm glad that you de-anoned since I can offer you so much loooove for the fic. Thank you so much, you made my day better ♥
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Lovely, lovely writing.
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