I'm so glad you de-anoned! I've been waiting to comment on how great this fic is :]
I love how you wrote the slow progression of change in Arthur's attitude towards his father and his orientation. I felt so happy for him in the end (which was perfect btw)! And I also really like Merlin's loyalty to Arthur and the amount of effort he was willing to give to make it work between them. He's a saint for living and working through all that lol. Elena was also perfect here, which I loved too.
Gah, this fic was just amazing and had me tearing up at parts and I'm just glad it got all finished in a perfect way <3
Thank you!! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it, and took the time and trouble to let me know. Glad you liked Elena as well - she was probably one of the characters I had the most fun writing.
A truly powerful fic, with outstanding character development and -revelation, and a gripping, moving and tense plot development that never let me go while reading
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Oh, I just couldn't get enough free time with this magnificent fic this weekend. I just finished now and I am absolutely bawling my eyes out at just how perfect it has turned out.
You have done a great job of wrapping it up realistically, with the characters still suffering from some of the uncertainties of life. But you just make me know in my heart that things will work out. Any difficulties will be worked through so that the characters have a satisfying life together.
This fic is so full of love! All the intimate moments are perfectly executed without the feeling that I am reading porn, but that I am experiencing a love- honest and true, that can be cherished and honored.
Thanks so much for writing this beautiful story. I have really been on the edge of my seat all weekend, getting my family to stop bugging me while I'm trying to read! LOL!
I really enjoyed this. It was absolutely fantastic and beautiful, if a little heart breaking in the middle there (not that that's a bad thing, but I know what Arthur was going through). Thanks for posting and sharing this with us all.
Sorry for my verrrry late reply, and thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it, and I'm very pleased you enjoyed it! x
This was lovely. The progression of their relationship and also how they grew with and without each other was really interesting to read. I like how their choices were influenced by so many things, and how they grew to be stronger and more assured of themselves as time went on.
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I love how you wrote the slow progression of change in Arthur's attitude towards his father and his orientation. I felt so happy for him in the end (which was perfect btw)! And I also really like Merlin's loyalty to Arthur and the amount of effort he was willing to give to make it work between them. He's a saint for living and working through all that lol. Elena was also perfect here, which I loved too.
Gah, this fic was just amazing and had me tearing up at parts and I'm just glad it got all finished in a perfect way <3
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You have done a great job of wrapping it up realistically, with the characters still suffering from some of the uncertainties of life. But you just make me know in my heart that things will work out. Any difficulties will be worked through so that the characters have a satisfying life together.
This fic is so full of love! All the intimate moments are perfectly executed without the feeling that I am reading porn, but that I am experiencing a love- honest and true, that can be cherished and honored.
Thanks so much for writing this beautiful story. I have really been on the edge of my seat all weekend, getting my family to stop bugging me while I'm trying to read! LOL!
Enjoy the rest of your weekend!
XO
Donna
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