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[darkelfdelila]

I've been doing so good. why do i have to start feeling this way agian. i hate it, i dont want to be empty inside. but its one of those things that nobody can stop. i want to run as far as i can, but i know it wont take away this feeling. i dont know why i just dont ignore this feeling, it will be gone in the morning anyway. but i havent felt it in

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it was good

[karebear99]

as long as you convey to the reader what you are feeling it doesn't necessarily have to rhyme (and you spelled it correctly

Re: it was good

[darkelfdelila]

i loved it, your good at poems you should write more. it almost made me cry. thats what the truth does. love ya, britt

Re: it was good

[karebear99]

thank you
your good at poems to but you are your own worst critic just like me!

[hopewhisper]

Very good. I like the part went to my grave with nothign to show. Very romantic.

thank you

[darkelfdelila]

yeah i liked that part too.

[hopewhisper]

It doesn't sound like anything else you have wrote. It's different. Different is good.