Fic: Shot me Down (Cushing/Sanchez)

[darkeyedresolve]

Title: Bang, Bang You Shot Me Down
Author: Tommy H aka Darkeyedresolve
Rating: R
Pairing: Brian Cushing/Mark Sanchez
Summary: Even though they have parted ways, Cushing can’t say no to see Mark after the Texans drop a heartbreaker to the Jets in New York.

Bang, Bang You Shot Me Down

Brian groaned out and stretched his powerful body out on the bed, he

Comments

[emeh]

this was so heart-breaking and kind of makes me hate sanchez even more. i really like the emotion brian shows, like how he's confusing sex for something more and can't quite understand how sanchez just views it as sex. also, i like at the end how clay ends up calling and brian kind of sees that a better choice was there all along. c:

this was definitely worth the wait.

[darkeyedresolve]

I didn't want Sanchez to come out as badly as he did, haha. I guess I was just going off things I had read in their past. I reworked a lot of it and threw in more of the flash backs, which I didn't use in it before.

Glad it was worth the wait then

[du_secondaire]

God, Sanchez is such a playboy tool in this. I want to hit him with a stick.

Although I must say: good GAWD, the flashback scene in the back of the limo, in all of its glorious, partially-dressed debauchery, was one of the hottest damn things I've read in quite a while.

Nice work. Cush/Clay, plz?

[darkeyedresolve]

I've had that draft night scene in my head for a long time, and decided to just put it into this fic than write a whole new one. I may or may not write more of a fic based on that idea, but at least for now its in.

Cush/Clay is in the works, just like Cush/Merriman, and Cush/Ryans is as well.

[du_secondaire]

Cush/Ryans. UNF. I want to roll that up and smoke it. :P

[darkeyedresolve]

I'm thinking Demeco takes him down to an Alabama home game, give that Yankee boy some southern football experience.

And then take advantage of him.

[du_secondaire]

Uuuuuuu-UNF. Please write this, especially if it involves Naive!Cush and DeMeco is a dirty little minx.

[supercaptain182]

Sweet Grilled Cheesus, this is unbelievably hot.

Brian had a weakness when it came to Mark Sanchez; the man was his longtime friend and lover. Mark could play him like the piano; some kind of bittersweet sonnet.

AND

“Still want me?” Mark gave a final lick to the linebacker’s nipple before looking up at him, grinning while his hands worked to undo Cushing’s jeans.

“Y-Yes…” Brian couldn’t deny it, it was just the way he was…they way they were. He stroked his hand and then tugged on Sanchez’s hair, “Don’t be a dick about it.”

These lines really stood out, the first for being so lyrical and almost bittersweet, while the second set is blunt and sounds so natural. Hot, sir, very hot.

After my baby Tebow's day, I think he may be in need of some comfort *cough cough*

[darkeyedresolve]

You mean Tebow's almost miracle comeback? Yes, I think he could use some comfort and told he did a good job. I could see Urban showing up for that, or if you have someone in mind...let me knows...

And btw, I would have gotten to fic back to you sooner but for some reason I couldn't find where to save it from on the email....till just now.

-pretty, not smart-

[supercaptain182]

I'm thinking one of his Gator pals. *wink*

As for the fic, don't worry and take your time. I have a ton of homework and two tests through the middle of the week. I'm also thinking about the next fic in this "things that never happened in the F&F verse". I have the idea for five stories in total.

Ideas:
1. Chicken and Walls fic
2. Ringer AU/Takers x-over: Brian O'Conner and John Rahway (played by Paul Walker) are twins with secrets...
3. Mia Toretto, Criminal Mastermind. Inspired by Jordana's movie Debs, where she's an international jewel thief and pistol packing badass. What if she was the mastermind behind all the events in the first movie, along with Letty, and the rest of the team was in the dark.
4. The Brothers Hobbs--based on some ridiculousness from my lj featuring various incarnations of The Rock.
5. Based on an idea you gave me...Dom/Brian....*coughmpregcough*
By the time I finish these, I should be done with the Brian/Carter sequel.

[du_secondaire]

Sweet Grilled Cheesus, this is unbelievably hot.

This is unbelievably funny! :D