Love You More (Ouran drabble, Hikaru/Kaoru angst)

Jan 29, 2009 15:36

I'm not sure what it was supposed to be like when the idea first struck. But this is how it finished. A little push to keep my muses busy as the chemo tries to chase them away. Please enjoy. ^^

LOVE YOU MORE
An Ouran Host Club Drabble

Written by Miyu, Vampire Princess

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elisabell_angel January 30 2009, 00:32:17 UTC
This was really sweet... A good idea for a bond story ^^.

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darkflame_dragn February 2 2009, 18:52:38 UTC
Thank you. ^^

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treeflamingo January 31 2009, 16:56:44 UTC
Clearly, you agree with me that Kaoru simply must be the subject and main character in innumerable stories of angst and guilt. Clearly. I liked the details about the hospital (made everything more real), and I especially liked There was no reason to his path. No logical explanation. Only open road and speed. That's a great line, right there.

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darkflame_dragn February 2 2009, 18:57:22 UTC
Thank you for the kind words. ^^ I thought this story fit Kaoru much better than Hikaru. Mostly because we don't see Kaoru being hotheaded too often, but the potential is there.

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arthoniel February 2 2009, 13:44:16 UTC
Ooh, very nice!! I don't usually think of the twins as too particularly angsty, but this is good... :D

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darkflame_dragn February 2 2009, 18:59:00 UTC
Thanks very much! ^^

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