Fic: Series 6 Episode 1 part 2/4

[darkhorse_99]

Title: Series 6.1 Chapter 2/4
Author: Darkhorse_99
Rating: PG-13 for some language
Pairing: Connor/Abby, Emily/Matt
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: Nope, this is set in series 6 episode 1.
Beta'ing: Huge thank you to fredbasset for beta'ing the early draft of this and encouraging me to post it. Also a huge thank you to anonyme1 for giving it a run through. Any remaining

Comments

[fredbassett]

I adore the way you write Becker, from miming shooting the sheep to telling his men not to pose for photos. *g*

You've got the whole team off to a T in this. It's great fun and very true to the feel of an episode.

[darkhorse_99]

Yay! *grins madly*

[bigtitch]

This is fab. I love the banter between the team. And Connor's fanclub. You've got the voices dead-on!

[darkhorse_99]

Thank you!

[celeste9]

Ha, I knew Lester wouldn't be nearly so amused by the diictodon babies! Also I love the inference that he made Jess tell him. There's really fab characterization all through this, I can totally see each of them behaving the way you've written them.

[darkhorse_99]

*giggles madly* That's what I was going for, I wanted it to feel like an episode.

[fififolle]

This is so brilliant. I loved the teeny tiny anomaly but poor little mouse. Great dialogue!!