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elendiliel June 19 2010, 02:08:11 UTC
Ok, Sho-chan, no more alcohol for you! :P

Hopefully, Sho and Jun will work this out (with some Arashi help) and then they can go and makeout in the green room. XD

Can't wait for more! :)

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darkilk June 19 2010, 08:07:17 UTC
Lol. But if it's so fast a resolution then that would mean next part of the fic would be the last. \*o*/ 'Fraid I've got at least two or three more parts to add on for the moment. so bear with me?

Thanks for reading n the comments. :)

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hiro_chan June 19 2010, 04:22:00 UTC
i love how you worked aiba in here <3. how his simpleminded-ness and the whole shooting with the monkeys and such actually helped to give light to the whole thing. well done :D!

now what is sakumoto's problem?? more, more :D!

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darkilk June 19 2010, 08:12:10 UTC
Thank you so much for enjoying the tsd shout-out. Really wanted it in without becoming more dialogue-heavy again. It underwent a couple of rewrites n I'm quite happy with the way it turned out.

Sakumoto glitch, coming up in the next chappie. ;) thanks for enjoying n the comments. :) :)

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astrangerenters June 23 2010, 15:31:51 UTC
Nino has to learn that getting things through Sho's thick skull requires Sho's sobriety. I'm glad Aiba had a breakthrough with Jun, even if Aiba himself didn't realize it.

I like all the Aimiya interaction :)

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darkilk June 24 2010, 02:40:43 UTC
LOL. Aiba's "airheadedness" that is likely to elicit laughs of the good-natured kind, rather than the *roll-your-eyes-in-utter-disbelief* hooks me line and sinker.

GLad you liked the Aimiya. Wanted to do a decent job, yet was a little uncertain if I managed to pull it off cos I identify more with sakumoto. Didn't want a totally baka-Aiba and snarky Nino coming through, so I'm thrilled that this turned out well. :)

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yuui1010 June 26 2010, 09:47:40 UTC
I really enjoying this. Aiba is a genius >w<
And Sho should stop drinking to much, if he have problem like that. I love how you write the tsd talk, really nicely written well done. Although poor Nino~ the talk with Sho become useless ne~ ^O^
Looking forward for more, I want to know what Aiba found out, he looks pretty smart! in cases like this.

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darkilk June 26 2010, 12:02:40 UTC
LOL. Think the guy doesn't even realise that it's a problem.

Thank you for the praise. I really wanted to tear my hair out when I realised the possibility of another *flashback* which I really, REALLY didn't want.

Ironic isn't it? And the gamer had been so smug that he'd set out the chess pieces so nicely. Thanks for reading and commenting. :) :)

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harunomasu December 16 2010, 22:06:10 UTC
YOU MAKE ME CRAVE FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
*dies*

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darkilk December 18 2010, 05:48:18 UTC
Don't die, don't die! LOL. Been away for awhile, but the ideas are there, just the words are kinda in a block. Thanks for your patience, and of course, your support and comments. :)

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