Lying

[sam_davidson]

Starting Over

100 words
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Will gazed into the face across from him, its pallor softened by the candlelight. He hadn’t spoken to Bran, hadn’t dared to, in ten years, yet here they were at this party, hitting it off just like the first time.

No, not just like. Bran’s whole demeanor revealed that he was interested in Will in a way neither of

Comments

[sistermagpie]

OMG, fantastic! I can't believe how much promise you've put into this excellent little moment. It's like the start of a roller coaster.

[bronze_ribbons]

Oooh, nice!

[nigita]

Wonderful! This gave me shivers.

[genarti]

Oh, nicely economical, that. Well done!