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darkkevlar

Revelations & Repercussions 4/10

May 23, 2007 20:51

Pairing(s): Don/Coop/Lia(OFC)
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s):Slash
Author's Notes: As always thank you my beta
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Comments 12

philleegirl May 24 2007, 01:49:46 UTC

Aw, group hug for Coop! Don needs to make sure Billy is as sure about them as Don and Lia are. Great part! I hope we get to see Coop talking to Alan.

darkkevlar May 25 2007, 02:29:21 UTC

I know poor Billy..... Let's go and hug him: )

Thanks for reading.. I hope to have chapter 5 done soon and off to bubbleslayer on Mondayish......

*fingers crossed it turns out they way I want*

philleegirl May 25 2007, 03:27:14 UTC

Oh, well, if you insist we go hug him who am I to refuse? ;-)

I can't wait to read it!

darkkevlar May 25 2007, 20:11:03 UTC

oh yes we must, most certainly.... he needs us; )

i can't wait to read it either..... er... you know what i mean.

neur0vanity May 24 2007, 02:37:09 UTC

Wonderful chapter! God, so much pain and angst!

darkkevlar May 25 2007, 02:32:32 UTC

thanks!

Pain & Angst exactly what I was going for.... YAY!

irena_adler May 25 2007, 03:18:55 UTC

They expected a lot from Alan and Charlie to be automatically okay with it!

darkkevlar May 25 2007, 20:18:20 UTC

Yeah I know what you mean. I think from Don's perception his dad should be fine with whatever... and Alan just wants the best for both of his sons that he would not be on the band wagon yet...

THey needed to communicate but like most people they stop listening and let thier emotions get the run...

I am trying to mirror Don to close on the show as he is now. THat he is opening up a bit but he still has those control issues. In his mind as soon as his dad said he was not 100% with it he took it as he would never come around...

I think if he stayed and talked things out a bit more well, they would be on better fitting but I just don't see Don being there yet....

did that make any sense....? well hopefully chapter 5 will clean a few things up

melissima May 25 2007, 04:41:59 UTC

Billy! : snuggles up to him :

This is an awesome chapter, sweetie. I can't wait for him to wake up and talk to Don! Good job. :)

darkkevlar May 26 2007, 01:03:21 UTC

awwww, thank you.

and phillegirl and I are cuddling with coop but there is always room for more! ; )

boymommytotwo March 14 2009, 07:56:18 UTC

So when you get over yourself you need to talk to Billy.” She leaned towards him, brushing her lips over his before rolling away to snuggle against Coop.

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came back for a little reread... had to refresh my memory after i read your b&a nomination. congrats! btw!!! some really nice parts in this, this is one of my favorites - this whole progression of lia's to more evenly loving don and coop. i love all the characters, but especially your coop for some reason. your coop is vulnerable as well as a smart ass. i <3 him. :)

darkkevlar March 15 2009, 03:47:40 UTC

I sometimes reread stuff too. especially to help me get in the mood to write or even just to remember how it feels to write this 'verse

Thanks for coming back and the comment. I like Smart Ass vulnerable coop too.. to me that is more realistic than him being a bad ass all the time...

Interestingly enough that is what I am working on right now in the latest chapter of 'And baby makes four' Coop is feeling vulnerable and like a 3rd wheel and D/L make him realize that is NOT true.. Plus lots of hot porny sex.. I hope to write it soon but RL is not the best right now.