Revelations & Repercussions 5/10

[darkkevlar]

Pairing(s): Don/Coop/Lia(OFC)
Rating: R more so for language
Warning(s):Slash
Author's Notes: I was teasing sororcula telling her I was gonna make the college girls her and neur0vanity but alas that did not come out of my muse.  I was gonna try to make this scene a little longer just for the humor of it. Having either NV or soro ask for Billy’s

Comments

[irena_adler]

*chuckle* Love the last line. :)

The thing about why Don picks pink gumballs is a cool touch.

[darkkevlar]

I know last line so Coop....it makes me laugh when I read it. Heeee

Oh so glad you liked the pink gum ball thing. I originally wrote it with the color missing and also, why Don always picks that color. (when I sent it to bubbleslayer for a read through). i knew I wanted it to be something important and my she said something about making it like big league chew cause baseball players chew that.

so when I went back to fill in the blank spots it just clicked.

I am glad you liked it, I always try to introduce thing or a line from the show in the fics that I write. I like to work them in I think it lends things some continuity....

[philleegirl]

Okay, I feel better now. The last line was perfect. As was the conversation between Coop and Charlie. I love the reasoning on the pink gum ball and that it is Coop that has that insight into Don, not Charlie. (Sigh, it took me three times to get that right, I kept writing "Charlie, not Don.")

[darkkevlar]

Glad you liked the last line... it was fun to write

[philleegirl]

LOL!! You are too cute!

Yes, I agree with everything you said about Don and Coop and Lia.

Oh, and I have ever told you that I grin madly when one of the boys calls Lia, Lee? Cause I do!

[darkkevlar]

Oh, and I have ever told you that I grin madly when one of the boys calls Lia, Lee? Cause I do!
ha ha...

You know they are talking to you right? ; )

[boymommytotwo]

“You’re such a chick, and I love you too.”

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awwwwww....