Fool for Love

[darkkevlar]

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[munchkinofdoom]

Looks like everybody else is asleep so I get to comment first.

There are such subtle little things in this piece, that I love. From Billy's look across to Don as he fetches ice, to Don's conversation with Margaret, to Billy knowing who Don had been talking to.

And the ending is lovely.

[darkkevlar]

yeah they were all snoozing!

thank you so much for taking the time to comment and also for your help.

I changed the ending just a tad to make it less schmoopy....

[darkkevlar]

Thank you Leda.

I can see don letting his shell crack a tad for his mother ...

anyway glad you liked it. it means a lot that you read it and commented.

[irena_adler]

I liked how we got to see some of Don and Margaret's relationship. See how alike they are. The sex at the end was very bittersweet, nice.

[darkkevlar]

aww thank you! I sometimes with Margaret was alive so we could see Don and her together.... and thank you the sex was what I needed to be.

thanks for reading.

[nicelyobsessed]

I love the phone call with his mum, Don is so desperate and you broke my little heart with the end.
Beautiful fic honey!

[darkkevlar]

thank you for reading. I am glad i got to tell my version of how the 'broke up' .... but now Lia can kiss it all better ; )