Comments | darkkevlar: Title: Generations Prompts #54, #38, #67, #59, #124

darkkevlar

Title: Generations Prompts #54, #38, #67, #59, #124

Feb 07, 2008 20:47

Prompt: #54 Mother
Pairing/Characters: Don/Coop/Lia
Rating: R
Summary: Someone from Lia's past brings out feelings of what she could've had.
Word Count: 300
Notes/Warnings: Thanks to bubbleslayer, sororcula and mercilynn for all their help and thoughts on getting me through this and listening to me whine! Any other mistakes are mine ( Read more... )

don/coop/ofc numbers_slash

Comments 19

irena_adler February 8 2008, 20:41:11 UTC

So that's how it came up! Interested in seeing where this goes from here ...

darkkevlar February 11 2008, 00:44:34 UTC

indeed! I didn't really want to go with "oops i'm pregs scenario"

mercilynn February 9 2008, 02:47:07 UTC

*snickers*

“And no more smoking.”

Billy and Don smirked and replied in unison, “Yes, Mother.”

LOVE IT! The ending was fantastic and you managed to convey everything you were going for. *hugs*

darkkevlar February 11 2008, 00:45:09 UTC

aww thank ya!!!1

It came the way I wanted thanks to you too!

lorientad February 9 2008, 07:50:02 UTC

splendid!
i love how both of them are ready to put their fears of kids for her.
and i really love this series.

darkkevlar February 11 2008, 00:46:44 UTC

thank you so much! I have been waiting for months to get here and it was fun to introduce it this way : )

I ♥ the boys!

emmademarais February 11 2008, 03:17:46 UTC

HEE! Who knew Billy would be the sensible one in all of this? /grins/

darkkevlar February 12 2008, 02:00:45 UTC

thank you!

I'll give you a little spoiler.... *looks around*

Billy over the years has only done what he thought Don wanted allowing him to hold a piece of him. Then he got together with Don who also was seeing Lia, and again Billy accepted things. (the boys are a bit screwed up)

Now he has 2 people and in a way they mirror a family for him (Mother and Father) cause he didn't have that except for his Grandparents. His mom was a very ill woman and his daddy was not around...so Don and Lia are 'his parents' which I guess is a little ack but it works for me...

shhhhhhh

boymommytotwo March 6 2008, 06:02:21 UTC

aaawwwahahahaaaa... where's the rest???

:wants more now:

i love this little series so far! and want more (hello!)! i didn't really see a 'title' per se to the "let's have a baby" thing... but love all of the drabbles/ficlets/whatever.

your writing style works well with these because you have very good ideas and creative direction. you can convey movement in the story through these windows. i like it.

okay, i'm trying to close lj and go to bed...

darkkevlar March 7 2008, 03:50:13 UTC

OMG that is one of the best compliments I have ever gotten! thank yOU!!!!!!!!!

I have been waiting forever to do this storyline... but i had to wait a while before I could do the set up for it... (I can't wait till I do the actual LONG chaptered fic)

I didn't mean to write this as a drabble series cause I usually prefer long chapters but I gave it ago. I wasn't sure if coudl tell this whole story this way but i am really happy with the results.

I love drabbles and I am usually amaze on how well I know many authors who write them can tell a WHOLE story using them,,,

thanks again for the wonderful comment here and the others ones.

You do not know how much I appreicate them. They really make me feel validated as a fanfic writer that someone is enjoying my stories as much as I do.