And Baby Makes Four (2/12)

[darkkevlar]

3some 'verse
Pairing(s): Don/Coop/Lia
Rating:T to M as the story progresses
Word Count: 2535
Spoilers: Possibly up to the end of season 3, or at least three quarters of S3.
Summary: Legal issues makes things all the more real and Alan has a heart to heart with Lia
Author's Notes: Thanks to my beta

Comments

[mercilynn]

WHEEEEEEE! I ♥ you! Loved loved loved it!

Although... Couple of small tiny tiny things:

“That apron looks cute on you,” Lia remarked, nuzzling close to Billy’s ear. “Doesn’t it Don?
comma before Don and quotations after the question mark aaaaaaaaaaand

“Of course it does, but I think he would look better in the pink Mini Mouse one.”
It's Minnie Mouse, darlin'. ;-)

LOVED IT!

[anonymous]

I've followed your whole series and enjoyed it. However, I liked it better when it seemed to be Don with two lovers. For this episode and more recent drabble, it seems to be more like Lia with two lovers, which will be more true when she actually becomes pregnant and even more of the attention is centered on her. I honestly don't like that because then it feels as if the author is writing a fantasy with self between 2 characters and though I have nothing against that it makes for an awkward read. For me, that is. It also makes it seem less of a slash story than a woman with 2 guys story. I am also turned off by the having a family thing. 2 guys, 2 gals, 1 of each- I can buy that. But three is hard to swallow.

[darkkevlar]

I am trying not to make it a "Lia" story but the three of them.. and not just centered Don.. even though that is where it started. But their relationship has evolved.

i'm sorry you feel that way but leaving me and Anonymous comment doesn't give you much credence.

If you had left me a comment signed on who you were I would talk to you about your thoughts to get more insight maybe helping me evolve my story.

[anonymous]

I left good comments under anonymous before and you didn't seem to mind then. As for wanting to talk about evolving your story, I don't think you should change it because you need to write what you want. I guess I am sad when I have to drop a story and like to let the author know why. I understand the relationship is evolving but I feel that it was started as a slash (which I really enjoyed) so it could be posted here but now that it is really a "lucky girl, she's got Don and Billy" story it is more a general het story than anything else and really does not fall into the category of slash anymore (though yes, Don and Billy have sex but Lia is the focus so I think it has become more of a general het focus). The shift from Don as focus to Lia does that.

[darkkevlar]

thank you for further commenting.

I do write what I want but i also want to please the readers so knowing what they like and don't like is important. It is a fine line since I do it for pleasure but I also do it cause `I love people going on the journey with me.

Please know that I was not insulted or anything more curious and wanting to get further interaction from you. As for you being the anonymous commenter before I would honestly have no idea that is the same person or someone new each time.

I am sorry that you will be dropping the story But I have done in the past to with authors.

Thanks for your honest thoughts again no hard feelings I just wanted further clarification on what you were thinking.

[boymommytotwo]

another installment! YAY!!!!!!!

[darkkevlar]

oops, I never said thank you for reading.

but thank you!

[paksenarrion2]

I followed a rec of your journal for Numb3rs slash fics and I have to say that I am loving this trio.

I can hear RM's voice in my head when I read your Don dialogue. You have him down very well.

[paksenarrion2]

THank you I am glad you are enjoying, you have paid me the highest compliment in your comment.

Promise I have more coming..

thanks again

[darkkevlar]

THank you I am glad you are enjoying, you have paid me the highest compliment in your comment.

Promise I have more coming..

thanks again