Revelations & Repercussions 2/10

[darkkevlar]

Pairing(s): Don/Coop/Lia(OFC), Charlie, Alan
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s):Slash
Author's Notes: As always thank you my beta bubbleslayer who as always helps me with content and reigns me when needed .

Alan stepped into the dining room with a bread bowl in one hand and the risotto dish that Lia had made in the other. “I see my eldest abandoned you to

Comments

[irena_adler]

Want the next part very soon! :D

[darkkevlar]

Want the next part very soon! :D

yeah? me to... oh wait.. I'm suppose to write it. dang it!

And were your ears ringing? I literally was in your LJ rereading the Don, Coop fic and then going to read the next in the undercover one..... when I got this comment.....

[irena_adler]

So then where's my feedback? ;D

[neur0vanity]

I can't wait for them to have the conversation!!

[philleegirl]

So, I was finally able to read these (Mom called up and wanted ice cream and since it was mother's day I had to be nice!) I just love this look at the situation. Very cool. I love Charlie being rude to Coop and the conversation between Alan and Charlie. I hope Don has the courage to tell they the truth.

[darkkevlar]

Yeah bubbleslayer and I thought it would be funny if Charlie was rude to Coop but since he would be maybe a little intimdated by the agent he couldn't really do anything....

However, he still is protective of his brother so Coop could be 10 ft tall and Charlie would still try.

Well the conversation is done. It went sort of how I wanted. Hopefully bubbleslayer can reign it in and help me get it together more....

oy!

[philleegirl]

Betas are wonderful things when it comes to that. I should use my beta more, but she's a very busy gal and I'm just lazy.

[darkkevlar]

yeah betas are and mine is good.

lol. lazy huh?

well you seem to fine to me

[boymommytotwo]

and the whole family's here! WHOO-HOO!