I Want Everything Too Much... pt II

May 16, 2010 01:53

Rachel sat at the bar with her back to the stage, (because one should never let physical appearance cloud the judgment of vocal talent) cosmopolitan in one hand and a black sharpie in the other. Jesse was right beside her, elbows on the bar and beer in hand, facing the stage.

Rachel cringed and could instantly feel the rage boiling as the man at the ( Read more... )

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merty May 16 2010, 18:35:56 UTC
THAT is hilarious!
‘Oh hello, Lila’s already been fed and changed, there’s extra formula and diapers in the bag, oh and also when you’re putting her to bed, unless you sing ‘Touch Me’….oh yes ma’am it is a song from that sex filled musical….but unless you sing it she’ll cry tears that never end in a pitch that you wished didn’t exist)

a very good update to an intriguing story. and that ending... can't believe it stopped there! I feel for Rachel at the end... maybe she should have looked. Looking forward to your next installment.

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darklashes03 May 22 2010, 19:36:01 UTC
Thanks so much and hopefully I'll have an update soon:)

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powergrapes May 16 2010, 18:52:43 UTC
Next part! Next part! Next part! Next part! Next part! Next part!

So, I quite enjoyed this chapter. Love the flashback to Rachel/Quinn. Can't wait for Quinn to show up. Despite prompting for Drizzle/Rachel, I totally was hoping for Rachel/Quinn anyway.

Oh, and in case you didn't pick up on it, I want the next part.

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darklashes03 May 22 2010, 19:39:52 UTC
Hahaha
Yeah I kinda love flashbacks and I'm glad you enjoyed it. So this was most definitely going to be Quinn/Rachel from the beginning but I've become so intrigued with the idea of Rachel/Drizzle (even though it breaks my heart to do that to Quinn) that I've actually started another story that will most definitely be Rachel/Drizzle.
Anyways Thanks so much for reading and commenting and making awesome prompts<3

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ashlessica1235 May 16 2010, 20:52:11 UTC
at first i thought it was quinn and then she siggned the note drizzle and i was like AHA!!! moar please?

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darklashes03 May 22 2010, 19:40:25 UTC
Thanks so much and hopefully there will be more soon:)

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mjacton May 16 2010, 20:57:39 UTC
Please continue this soon!

I really like your writing, and I'm can't wait for more!

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darklashes03 May 22 2010, 19:40:50 UTC
Thanks so much<3

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morte206 May 17 2010, 02:28:53 UTC
Phenomonal, absolutely sublime twist with the note.

That being said I will cop to a slight disappointment in that you do not seem inclined to ultimately make this a Rachel/Drizzle fic. A good healthy serving, via flashbacks, of R/Q is lovely but I will admit that I find the idea of Rachel/Drizzle extremely intriguing. Frankly I think you have it in you to deliver the goods on both fronts but whatever path you chose to lay before us I shall willingly follow.

Thank you for sharing.

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darklashes03 May 22 2010, 19:53:42 UTC
Thanks so much.
So when I first started writing this it was definitely my intention for it to be Quinn/Rachel with a side of Drizzle...but the idea of Rachel/Drizzle has invaded my mind. I've actually started another fic that is going to be Rachel/Drizzle and when I read your comment I was like 'kismet...it has to be done!'
Thanks so much for reading and commenting

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