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darkly_ironic

What Would You Change? -- A Dr. Horrible Fanfic

Feb 03, 2011 09:59

Title: What Would You Change?
Rating: PG-13
Paring: Billy/Penny
Word Count:338
Summary: If he'd been a little faster, a little smarter, maybe she wouldn't be dead.
A/N: Written for the 10_titles challenge.

( There's a flash of fire, and Captain Hammer's dead... )

challenge: 10_titles, fan fiction, pairing: billy/penny, character: dr. horrible/billy, genre: het, fandom: dr. horrible's sing-along blog

Comments 7

smthwallflower February 9 2011, 07:02:05 UTC

Ooo, you know, I've never even thought of him using the Freeze Ray to freeze Penny before!

>> an overexposed after-image that fades the instant he tries to focus on it <<
Gah, I totally know what that is! Love that line.

This works so well with the title- all the what if scenarios. Poor Billy.

This was awesome :)

darkly_ironic February 10 2011, 18:03:36 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. : D

meridian_rose March 13 2011, 11:34:18 UTC

Very enjoyable and believable, that he's thinking of every possible way he might have reacted that could have saved Penny.

darkly_ironic March 15 2011, 16:24:57 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it and found it believable. Thanks for commenting! : D

thishidden_muse April 14 2011, 06:56:57 UTC

Oo, I enjoyed the imagery of this. And very in-character for our poor Doctor. Great job!

darkly_ironic April 16 2011, 20:30:08 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it and it seemed in-character!

isarn November 18 2011, 13:14:24 UTC

Just lovely!