Comments | darkmage009: [fic] Hate/Not-So-Hate

darkmage009

[fic] Hate/Not-So-Hate

Jul 08, 2008 20:22

Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Title: Hate/Not-so Hate
Pairing/Characters : Oshitari Yuushi/Atobe Keigo
Rating: General or PG
Genre: Romance? Angst? I dunno.
Word Count: 779

Notes: I took a break from writing angsty fanfics because my current life is angsty enough and I need more love in this world! Anyway, I thought of this idea when I was thinking ( Read more... )

oshiato, prince of tennis, fic

Comments 10

invidia92 July 8 2008, 15:59:44 UTC

This was really, really good ^^ Thanks for writing it!

darkmage009 July 9 2008, 10:20:40 UTC

No problem. ^o^
And thanks for that lovely comment.
(And awesome Yuushi-icon) XD

dame_batsie July 8 2008, 20:37:36 UTC

Oh, Atobe, you hypocrite.

Good stuff here. I'd like to see some more bondage--I mean, bonding--between these two.

sweeteglantine July 8 2008, 20:47:29 UTC

Aww, this was really sweet. ^__^ And it's just so incredibly real - at least, to me it is - for Atobe to make many exceptions to his preferences for Yuushi, but not ever admit to it outside of his own mind. The only suggestion I would make to you is to watch out for idiomatic usage, but other than that, good job on this. <3

darkmage009 July 9 2008, 10:19:20 UTC

Oh, thank you for reading. :3
*glomps*
Did I use any idioms...?
I didn't notice at all or was not aware at all. :3

sweeteglantine July 12 2008, 10:28:42 UTC

Idiomatic usage refers to things like using based on as opposed to using based off of because the latter would be incorrect. :3 I think you misused some in your fic, but it's no biggie. Idiomatic usage is tricky. ;D

Oh, great Boo! yellmi17z July 9 2008, 07:40:38 UTC

I really really really LOVED it!
You are sooo great! XDD
I can't give you something to express how much I like your fics! And this one is sooo beautiful too. Cool and sexy! XDD
Why can't I find you at FF.Net? Using another penname? Since you are GREAT BOO! ;D

Re: Oh, great Boo! darkmage009 July 9 2008, 10:16:10 UTC

yeah, I'm using another penname. And I don't frequently use ff.net. I'm more of a lj user now... I post my fanfics here coz it's faster. XD

Thank, glad you liked it. :3

Oh, Great Boo! yellmi17z July 10 2008, 00:00:41 UTC

Oh so it was like that,, I have been using ff.net and I lived my account sooo empty here :P

I realized something!
This fic is kinda like Ten Love Evidence from Atobe to beloved Oshitari XDDD

I like your way describes Atobe's feeling towards Sanada and Tezuka, since Oshitari is still the best for him XDDD