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darknessgryphon

Backtrack Chapter 1/?

Dec 09, 2007 22:05

Title: Backtrack
Length: Chaptered; 1/?
Genre: Eh... A little bit of everything- Drama, Romance/Fluff , Humor, a little Angst
Pairings: Jaeho, more to come
Rating: PG-13
Summary: After a bizarre accident during a performance of 'Choosey Lover' Jaejoong has amnesia, only retaining his memories from before the age of five. On indefinite hiatus, the boys ( Read more... )

c: jaejoong, c: changmin, c: yunho, c: junsu, p: jaeho, fic: backtrack, c: yoochun, g: angst

Comments 9

kattan69 December 10 2007, 05:22:35 UTC

Hi! I just added you, pls 'friend' me. Would be happy if you could continue this story. It sounds interesting. I know I've read this somewhere before - something similar with Jae in an accident and wakes up with a mind of a 5 years old. But that story also ends up with chapter 1. Anyway, pls quickly update! Thanks a lot!

darknessgryphon December 10 2007, 05:26:13 UTC

I think that shineko291 is also writing something with five-year-old Jae, but as stated there, the plot goes in a completely different direction. i can't really say more or I'll spoil the rest of the fic.

Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'll certainly try to update soon.

moonbin_is_love December 10 2007, 05:53:19 UTC

O.o
yunho must be very shocked.

this is interesting.
i'd like to know how jaejoong gain his memory again x3

update soon ne dear <3

and i can friend u? =] its nice to have new friend *huggles*

darknessgryphon December 10 2007, 06:23:33 UTC

Thank you for reading! Yunho is pretty shocked, and with all of that stress in one day, it's a surprise he hasn't just passed out. As for how joongie'll get his memory back, we'll both have to see because that's something I haven't figured out yet either ^^U.

And yes! You can friend me! :: huggles back::

shineko291 December 10 2007, 06:42:19 UTC

This really made me smile... it was done really well even had all the technical things... I think this story can only get better. can't wait for the next chap =)

-shineko291

thanks for doing my plunnie

darknessgryphon December 10 2007, 06:48:27 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad I made you smile. Jaeho is not my forte, so I was kind of worried ^^

It's a great plunnie to work with and I have the details mostly hashed out; I've even figured out how to stick Kangteuk and Sungmin in there, which you'll see eventually and Se7en makes himself very present later on.

I really hope the rest will be up to your standards.

chloe1910 December 10 2007, 13:58:30 UTC

I like this alot!!! But can I ask whether you written a prologue to this cause this sounds very familiar..not as complete as this part but something about them having a concert and the light fell on them..I think you have right? Either that it's deja vu..but I'm convinced that you have..

Er, sorry, I'm rambling incoherrently again...Please update soon yeah!

I've added you, fren me back?

darknessgryphon December 10 2007, 22:22:50 UTC

Incoherency is okay, as long as it's the good kind ^^.

No I haven't written a prologue of this, not to my knowledge anyways (perhaps it's the work of some unknown alter ego?). This fic may bear similarities to others that came before it because i know that amnesia!Jae has definately been done before, but I don't think it's ever been done quite the way I'm planning for it to go ^^.

I friended you back ^^

kattan69 December 20 2007, 10:33:06 UTC

Hi! Pls update soon on the next chaper. I really like this story as it sounds interesting especially the mystery that it is not an accident. Also, the Jaeho portion. I'm a sucker to this pairing. Pls continue and don't stop. Thanks!