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darknessgryphon

[Oneshot] A Risk of Flight

Apr 20, 2009 23:50

( Jaejoong had worked away his life until work became his life. A mundane affair that clocked out by a quarter to six. A story with no plot and a pathetic moral. )

c: junsu, c: jaejoong, length: oneshot, p: jaesu, fandom: dbsk, g: romance

Comments 22

harkk April 21 2009, 11:54:50 UTC

Aww. Me likey! *swoons* :D

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AWW. (I seriously don't know what else to say. D:)

darknessgryphon May 2 2009, 04:31:58 UTC

Aww, thankies. You needn't say more :)

weerainbow April 21 2009, 12:16:47 UTC

When I reached the end of that I let out a big, contented, happy sigh...I love that last line. It's such a stark contrast to how Jaejoong was in the beginning, simply existing with (aparently) nothing to live for. You wrote the progression so well, it was so smooth and almost like Jaejoong changed completely before I even knew it.
I keep reading the last line over and smiling :o)
Thanks!

darknessgryphon May 2 2009, 04:32:31 UTC

JaeSu just brings love like that :) thanks for reading and commenting

chloe1910 April 21 2009, 13:57:34 UTC

Love this...it's rather inspiring...that sometimes, it's good to take risk and hope...

darknessgryphon May 2 2009, 04:33:04 UTC

Yes, yes, and I'm hardly ever inspirational like this :) I'm glad you liked it, Chloe

kuro_wolf April 21 2009, 16:41:59 UTC

Aishh.. I love you.
I love this JaeSu.
I love the plot, i love the shyness, the gila-ness, i love the meeting.
Sigh, did i mention i love this? yea.. Hehehehe XD

darknessgryphon May 2 2009, 04:33:31 UTC

:) Thank you. I always love seeing your comments :)

jedi_baby April 21 2009, 20:44:05 UTC

aww, it gives me a nice fuzzy feeling. =]
makes me all cheerful. what's life if you can't enjoy it?
jaesu! *squee*

darknessgryphon May 2 2009, 04:33:49 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting.