[Oneshot] Haloesque

[darknessgryphon]

The sky is a dizzy myriad of colors, all wrong and somehow threatening, but Junsu watches kids play under the too-vibrant lights everyday. Maybe, he thinks, he’s just becoming maladjusted to what’s always been there. Maybe he thought it was stirring once, actually beautiful in its eeriness, but entrapment has gotten him yearning for something

Comments

[weerainbow]

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!
You actually brought tears to my eyes, it's so beautiful.
The way you drew me in, confusing me and yet intriguing me at the start, and then gradually unravelling the story in much the same way as Junsu was discovering what was happening...it was brilliant!
And the MinSu was so...tender and loving.
The confession felt like a warm hug too
<33333333

[darknessgryphon]

:) Thank you for reading, commenting, and falling into my story ~<3

[darknessgryphon]

i.. I love you ;~;

[bellasurus]

this was absolutely amazing. i just. i don't have any words. thank you so much for this cos i need it so much right now. the way it flows, the way junsu's depressed at the beginning but how he still lets min in anyway, how min doesn't give up and then it flows into the twist (which i rly didn't see coming >>;)

i can't rmbr my original prompt, haha, but this is perfect and i wouldn't have it any other way. thanks for writing it! :D (i...could write sth for you in return? O:)

[darknessgryphon]

The picture at the top was the prompt ^^ I'm very glad you liked the piece. It took me quite awhile find the right angle to approach the prompt from :)

lakjdlkjfal also.implodes at the parenthetical offer

[bellasurus]

heeheee yep :D
lately i've only been able to write su!pairings, though >_>; so~pairing and prompt? XD

[darknessgryphon]

This caters very well to my raging su-bias 8D

mm, how about Jaesu um.. you make me wonder why
you are a beautiful mystery
every note carved into musical history
a simile, metaphor... words not enough to
entrust to you,
trust that its true
we must have a clue but we asked for evidence
dwell in passing sentiments though we bask in eminence
every moment every day, busy getting paid away, the soul fades away into a grainy shade of grey
i pray, that you'll listen to what i say,
cause i feel like a missing shoe
this is to everything that you are,

from epik high's map the soul (worldwide version)

8D

*already thanks you profusely*

And just tell me if that prompt doesn't work out, i can always find something else if this doesn't work out :)

[akaxiah]

knew that junsu must have been in some sort of 'condition' at the start.
wah. this was so well-written. (it's like it was based on experience or something).
really loved how everything just proceeded steadily, and that there's really no conclusion, not yet, at least ♥

write more please~

[darknessgryphon]

:) well, then i'm glad you got it. and fortunately, i've never been in a coma... or had changmin save me. sad that bit.

I'm glad you enjoyed, I'll certainly write more asap :)

[chloe1910]

This is truly lovely Sumi ah.... I am glad that Changmin's voice gave Junsu the strength to fight and wakes up.

[darknessgryphon]

Thank you Chloe~~~