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[melissacorsair]

helloo i've been working with darkroom black and white photography for a while now and i'm looking for constructive criticism, what i can do better and what you like. i'm going into color this summer so i'd like to know what i should maybe start doing to make my photos more interesting and better, if anything. i'm sorry these are all photos of

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[sweetgrnpea]

I love the shot behind the girl as she looks at the painting. Beautiful pictures.

[dasgrafik]

Oddly, I like the photograph *of* a photograph effect.

And the pictures themselves look excellent.

[katiebones]

i love #1 and 5 they are great! the rest are good, but those are my favorite. they only thing i can really say by looking at them here (cause in person it's a little easier) is that there might be some dust and dirt. Cropping on 2 kind bugs me, just getting the rest of her hat in would be great. i kinda wish 4 were centered, but that might be my OCD. 6 could be cropped to focus more on the person and 7 looks alittle blurry. Ok so now that it looks like i'm saying you're horrible, i'm not you have some great shots i'm so into #1. good job and keep it up

[abunchofrandom]

I think you have a wonderful eye for composition! I am especially thrilled with 1, 3, 5 and 7

[katiebones]

weird i didn't know you were on this community.

[abunchofrandom]

I think I probably found it by looking at your profile! I love (and miss) photography.