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Apr 26, 2005 23:20

Wrote a script today with Sonya, for drama class. Took us 5 hours. Here it is, you can look at it if you want. Or don't, I'm not sure what to think of it ( Read more... )

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malibu87 April 26 2005, 20:40:05 UTC
I like it. But the happy place line kind of made me uneasy. . . in a bad way. But I like it as a whole.

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darktremor April 27 2005, 14:51:25 UTC
heh - that's a favorite of most others. Then again, everyone who saw this got to actually hear it - I did voice re-enactments reading it to them. The last line was the one that made most others uneasy. It could be because that line is impossible to re-enact using voices how it would look on stage, and so everyone I read it to was brutally confused...but it's also a little...odd/scary, and I won't be able to tell if it's any good until it goes up. The happy place line probably didn't make anyone uncomfortable because of the speed I read that one at. It's so fast that almost nothing he says REALLY sinks in, it just sounds funny to hear a Gestapo man say "happy place" in an angry rage (or so it seems). Also, it took me 4 reads of the line (which I came up with through improv) to actually realize what it's saying. I don't know ( ... )

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