Past lives

Aug 24, 2009 06:41

This is only the first part. There's more that I'm working on.

Story this way )

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Re: Drabble: Part 2 darsnape_dracul August 25 2009, 12:44:45 UTC
This story is made of so muchy epic win!!! (is grinning maniacally) I like that we get to see decent glimpses of everyone, and I finally get to hear Gabriel's voice. He's way too quiet.

Also, I like your characterization of Dar here. I think you have him pinned down pat.

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I found a picture of Dar and Sev darsnape_dracul August 30 2009, 23:02:02 UTC

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Re: What Thankless Jobs We Take for Those We Love: Part 2 darsnape_dracul August 29 2009, 07:54:41 UTC
DAMN!!!!!!
I ... just... wow!!!
You got so much in there!! The graverobber, and the song form the line, and the characterization, and the graverobber and the songlyrics and everything!!!!

And Dar totally would be a Graverobber when he grows up. (What do you want to be when you grow up, little boy? A graverobber! )

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Re: What Thankless Jobs We Take for Those We Love: Part 2 anonymous August 29 2009, 15:25:50 UTC

Past Lives continued anonymous August 29 2009, 13:55:49 UTC
The inn was like every other that they had seen over the years. It was warm and smelled of stale beer and too many unwashed people shoved in too small a space. Darian inhaled the smoky environment with something that felt like home. He’d never found any place that he could call home, so he settled for placing that name to any place where he lay his head down that night ( ... )

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