Re: Drabble: Part 2darsnape_draculAugust 25 2009, 12:44:45 UTC
This story is made of so muchy epic win!!! (is grinning maniacally) I like that we get to see decent glimpses of everyone, and I finally get to hear Gabriel's voice. He's way too quiet.
Also, I like your characterization of Dar here. I think you have him pinned down pat.
Re: What Thankless Jobs We Take for Those We Love: Part 2darsnape_draculAugust 29 2009, 07:54:41 UTC
DAMN!!!!!! I ... just... wow!!! You got so much in there!! The graverobber, and the song form the line, and the characterization, and the graverobber and the songlyrics and everything!!!!
And Dar totally would be a Graverobber when he grows up. (What do you want to be when you grow up, little boy? A graverobber! )
Past Lives continued
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August 29 2009, 13:55:49 UTC
The inn was like every other that they had seen over the years. It was warm and smelled of stale beer and too many unwashed people shoved in too small a space. Darian inhaled the smoky environment with something that felt like home. He’d never found any place that he could call home, so he settled for placing that name to any place where he lay his head down that night
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Also, I like your characterization of Dar here. I think you have him pinned down pat.
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I ... just... wow!!!
You got so much in there!! The graverobber, and the song form the line, and the characterization, and the graverobber and the songlyrics and everything!!!!
And Dar totally would be a Graverobber when he grows up. (What do you want to be when you grow up, little boy? A graverobber! )
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