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fic: Body, MInd, and Soul - part 3

Oct 10, 2011 22:19

Title: Body, Mind, and Soul - part 3
Author: darthbatgirl
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Characters: Roy/Tim
Summary: The raspberries are ripe and Roy and Tim come to terms to their new relationship.
Word Count: 1168
Warnings: AU, Slavefic, some food play - kind of
A/N: yep more of this bunny

Part 1 , Part 2

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series: body mind and soul, roy/tim

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darthbatgirl October 11 2011, 13:47:20 UTC

Hmm Roy does have a way with words now doesn't he? He has every intention of sweet talking his Tim.

And yeah squishing Tim is always the right response (Tim might think otherwise but well we can just ignore that.) And thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying the style of the story.

Thank you so much for reading hon.

the_protagonist October 11 2011, 13:49:32 UTC

Ah! No one rights Tim and Roy AUs quite like you, love.

So glad there was another part to this and can't wait for more!

(Uh... there will be more... right?!)

*hugs*

darthbatgirl October 12 2011, 02:48:29 UTC

Aw thanks sweets, your going to make me blush.

And yes there will be more, the bunnies are being so terribly pushy on this one.

"hugs and kisses"

larsinger29 October 11 2011, 14:26:42 UTC

Oh damn. You are simply wonderful at building this slow seduction between the two of them. I love how Roy feels drawn in to Tim, yet he still cares about making Tim comfortable and happy. His willingness to hold back even though he's allowed to do whatever he wants is really telling. I can't wait to see how you continue to play with their roles and the lines created in such a society.

Also, that last line was killer. Left me grinning from ear to ear.

Great job, my dear! This was another awesome installment!

darthbatgirl October 12 2011, 03:02:10 UTC

Roy definitely puts limits on himself where Tim is concerned. Roy's attraction to Tim is in conflict with how he thinks he should behave. He has this voice going off inside his head saying 'this is how you should behave'. The fact that he owns Tim doesn't seem to quiet that voice.

Hee I'm glad you liked that last line, I thought it summed up Roy's feelings perfectly.

kyrdwyn October 11 2011, 14:59:40 UTC

Oh, Roy, I think you are just the Master that Tim needs....patient and understanding and seductive.....

So happy that you're continuing this! :)

darthbatgirl October 12 2011, 02:50:46 UTC

Roy really is the best Master for Tim. He'll know just how to take care of his little bird.

So glad you're enjoying this.

sashas87 October 11 2011, 15:25:48 UTC

Poor Tim is so skittish. He acts like he expects to be staked out in the courtyard with a sign reading "free gropes." I'm surprised he wasn't shaking.

On he other hand, he seems like he calms down and opens up to Roy at the first kind word given, which really makes me want to smack either Daddy Bats if they are actually his sons in this verse, or smack the Drakes and glare at Daddy Bats for not making it better yet if Bruce is still a collector of lost boys.

Roy will give Tim love and support and cuddles it looks like, so things shouldn't be too bad. Until the big Problem happens(If this is an epic, as opposed to a short'n'sweet).

darthbatgirl October 12 2011, 03:11:52 UTC

Tim's skittishness has a little more to do with what he's expecting to happen and it's not happening. He knows how slaves are treated and Roy's not treating him like that which is really confusing Tim - he's waiting for the other shoe to drop.

Hee 'Daddy Bats' I like that. Yeah growing up with Bruce isn't easy, but in the upcoming parts I hope to show how close they are actually are.

So glad you enjoyed this, thank you so much for reading.