fic Baby Mine parts 5 & 6

[darthbatgirl]

Title: Baby Mine part 5 & 6
Author: darthbatgirl
Beta: larsinger29
Rating:  PG
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Characters: Roy/Tim, Steph, Cassandra, Bruce, Jason Blood, Lian, Damian, Dick, Jason, Alfred,
Summary: Tim finds a baby in his living room one morning. With Roy's help, Tim discovers that the baby is his and Roy's. This discovery leads Roy and Tim

Comments

[larsinger29]

The proposal was so perfectly adorable! It came off very believable and organic, and Tim's reaction was prefect. I'm really loving all the family focus in this fic, not just on the Harper-Drake clan, but their extended members as well. You do a great job capturing each character, and it's so much fun to read how they interact with one another. (The betting pool just had me grinning like a loon. Especially Bruce and Alfred's roles in it!)

The idea of a simple, to the point wedding really fits well with Tim and Roy's personalities; just as the arguments between Lian and Damian works for theirs (I sometimes think they argue just for the fun of it, which makes them all the more adorable). What's also excellent in this is the little touches: Roy tickling Jack's feet, the way both men play and take care of the baby, their obvious affection for one another. It really shines through in your stories, and it's very nicely done here.

Terrific installment! I'm off to go read the final part now! :o)

[darthbatgirl]

And yet again proposal was made so much better with your advise. Though Roy so richly enjoyed telling Tim as to why he wanted to marry him.

Some BFFs play video games, some hang out at the mall, Lian and Damian argue. It just works for them.

And really, Roy and Tim, best Dads ever.

[lunatic_lullaby]

...ever since Jack had come into their lives Damian had been strangely respectful of Tim as a parent.

With Damian's giant bag of parent issues, that feels nicely fitting. I can really see how becoming a father - and a good father - would change Damian's view of Tim.

That proposal was so wonderful and natural. Roy's touching profession of love seemed effortless, not at all daunted by Tim's moment of doubt. You did beautiful work with that whole scene. :)

“Timothy Jackson Drake . . . er Drake-Wayne or whatever version is current right now, marry me.”

Have to love it when even the characters start getting confused about continuity. XD

I'm glad they decided on something simple that would make them happy. :)

[darthbatgirl]

Damian got to see Tim in a whole new light. This whole parent/child is a big puzzle to him. Watching Tim is very enlightening for him.

And I loved the proposal, just so them ya know. And yeah had to have fun with the last name thing. It just amuses me.