Luminous Dust 9/16

Dec 02, 2005 22:27

Title: Luminous Dust
Author: Dolly (darthdolly)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Anakin/Obi-Wan
Timeframe: post RotS AU
Summary: coming soon. maybe! ^^;;
Spoilers: possibly for RotS
Warnings: Contains slash and mentions of mature themes, but nothing explicit.
Notes: This is the sequel to my story What Comes of It, which can be found HERE. So you'll probably ( Read more... )

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I'm LOVING this story! anonymous December 6 2005, 06:44:53 UTC
I haven't sent a comment to this story so far but I want to now. I really enjoy it and this chapter was awesome. I really love the way you write Anakin and Obi Wan. You're an awsome writer and I can't wait to read the next chapter :)

*Hugs*
Steph

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Re: I'm LOVING this story! darthdolly December 13 2005, 19:36:50 UTC
Hi Steph,
Thank you for taking the time to reply, I really appreciate it! And thank you for your kind words. ^_^

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First time reviewing anonymous December 6 2005, 23:54:53 UTC
Darth Dolly,
I must say that I really enjoy reading your stories and am looking forward to the next chapter. Also, I believe I know who this new villian is, we shall just have to wait and see if I am right in my suspisions. Also, I find your rendidtions of the characters very likeable and true to design. Will be waiting for each chaper.
Anne Ominus

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Re: First time reviewing darthdolly December 13 2005, 19:37:57 UTC
Anne Ominus,
Thanks for the compliment, I'm glad you like my characterizations! And let's see if you're right about our villian. ;)

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avari_maethor December 8 2005, 04:59:00 UTC
I am very tempted to use a line I read in 'The Ten Minute Two Towers' by Molly J. Ringwraith... oh hell...

"SHE? DID HE SAY 'SHE' AND 'HER' WHO IS 'SHE' AND 'HER'?!"

Okay... that's done... awesome chapter I loved how all the built up emotions came together with that one single kiss.

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darthdolly December 13 2005, 19:39:35 UTC
LOL! What a fitting line. :) Thanks for replying!

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spirit_of_allia December 13 2005, 06:19:58 UTC
You must update x.x I'm sorry, I'm really really bad at reviewing, but I've kept this pages minimized at the bottom of my screen and keep refreshing it every few hours with hopes that the next chapter has appeared. The suspence! Ahhh you're killing me...

-ShadowSpirit(s)

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darthdolly December 13 2005, 19:40:53 UTC
Ack, I've been so slow, I know! ^^;; But I'll be updating in a few minutes, thank you for your patience and your reply. :)

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avlyn_naturae December 13 2005, 12:18:22 UTC
The confession of love is so appropriate and the gift of the crystal made everything much more sentimental. Just when I was hovering among the fluffy clouds, you brought me down to earth with the last part. I want to know who the mysterious people are and I'm really just hoping everything's going to be all right.

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darthdolly December 13 2005, 19:43:04 UTC
Thank you! And nice to know I've caught your attention with that last bit. ;)

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