Luminous Dust 14-16/16 + Epilogue

[darthdolly]

I haven't dropped off the face of the earth . . . I'm back! I'm so sorry to have kept anyone waiting, I've been too darn busy lately and I hadn't thought anyone was actually reading here, so this poor little journal was what got neglected. ^^; But if by chance you have been waiting for more of Luminous Dust, I hope this makes up for my long absence

Comments

[_shinchansgirl_]

of course we're still here! You didn't think we'd disappear, did you? ;)

Anyways, it was a marvelous update, and I love the ending.

“Give it time, Mara,” Anakin said, his face calmer than she had ever seen it. “The Jedi will return.”

And she knew she could believe him.

Those two lines were just...perfect.

And I'm glad you haven't fallen off the edge of the world - it's good to have you back! :) Thanks so much for the (extremely large) update!

[darthdolly]

Thanks so much for remembering me! ^_^ And I'm glad you liked the ending, I enjoyed writing it to be happy.

[anonymous]

does this work without logging in? hey, it does :D
well, i'll review :p
nice story, really nice (it took me some searching fot it though. at the A/N (Fanfiction.net)of the prequel to this story you said the story was to find here, so i went looking.)
great story.

Greetings, Lea Nikkaya.

[darthdolly]

Hi there! Thanks for making your way over here and commenting, I really appreciate it. :)

[tradesland]

Oh, oh wow, sch a beautiful story, I love this endig, I love it!

I like these kind of stories, in which Anakin redeems himself and Obi Wan suffer but get vindicated in the end (heh, blush, kink much?). But you story is so much more and It got me hooked since the beggining.

I could quote so many lines but I wont, I just want to say to you: THANK YOU, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS.

T.

[darthdolly]

Psst . . . I like those kinds of stories too! And thank you as well for reading, I really appreciate your comment. :)

[anonymous]

Beautiful! I've been waiting for this series to continue and I almost thought you would never continue writing. So thanks for posting these new chapters! *hug*
I love the ending. Now Obi-Wan has to deal with two Padawans and both want his attention. Very popular, Kenobi is.

[ryuniel]

Oops! forgot to login :p

[darthdolly]

Sorry to have left you hanging, and thanks for reading! ^_^ I'm glad you liked the ending, I don't think I could write a story with a sad one. ^^;

[ewans_dharma]

Sorry if this is a silly question, but what happened to chapter 13? Or isn't there any ?

[darthdolly]

Oh, I forgot to add it to memories, oops! ^^; Chapter 13 is there with the rest now, thanks for pointing that out.