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[mahoukyuachan]

I'm seeking help. I wrote some lyrics, and I'm pretty sure they're mostly okay. I just want to check and make sure. I'm gonna post what I wanted it to be in English, as well, for referance. I'll put asterisks by the lines I think I did wrong. There's also a line at the bottom saying "Even if it takes forever" in English. It's supposed to be in

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[anonymous]

By Spring, I had already formed hopes

春にはもう期待（きたい）していた or 春にはもう望み(のぞみ)を抱いていた（いだいていた）

I confessed my feelings and looked into your eyes

私は気持ちをさらけだしあなたの瞳（ひとみ）を見つめた

Unfortunately, I didn't see you at all so

でもあなたに全然（ぜんぜん）会えなかったから

I watched you from afar while

遠くからあなたのことを見ていると

Even if it takes forever

たとえ永遠（えいえん）の時がすぎても

[anonymous]

あなた means "you" with more respect or adoration.
ほれた is more like "have a crush" so 愛する or 恋に落ちる are better when you want to express falling in love.